Perennials of War
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Comment from c_lucas
The strong should
mock the weak
Humiliation was commonplace
But Death was quick to follow
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This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2017
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The strong should
mock the weak
Humiliation was commonplace
But Death was quick to follow
***
This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2017
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Thank you for the kind review.
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You're welcome, Barbara. Charlie
Comment from royowen
The concentration were the worst idea conceived by man, they "hell bent on exterminating people who were "different" many different people of diverse bacground. Good research and background writing, good scribing Barbara, well done, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2017
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The concentration were the worst idea conceived by man, they "hell bent on exterminating people who were "different" many different people of diverse bacground. Good research and background writing, good scribing Barbara, well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 09-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2017
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Thank you for the encouraging review.
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Welcome Barbara
Comment from apky
I enjoyed the film. Where could I get the link? I'd like to post it on my FB page because I love the way it portrays tradition, with everything allotted their place and time. To me that's order.
She used to(the, her) fingers to count the greats.
How I became interested is through their son (? something missing here) was Elijah.
"This is worse than The Book of Matthew and all the begotten." Jeff grinned. ~ I grinned as well, with the same thoughts, hahaha...
"Basically anybody the Nazis didn't like or understand," added Philip. "It probably included Jehovah's Witness, Roman Catholics,(I don't think Roman Catholics got into the list of "unwanteds") or anybody who exhibited any socially deviant behavior."
"Correct." Shana continued, "The inmates worked twelve hour days at hard physical work, wore rags, never had enough to eat, and the risk of corporal punishment was imminent. Those who couldn't keep up were murdered. There was a name given to these people, Muselmanner, or living dead because of their appearance. They resembled round-shouldered skeletons." Tears rolled down her cheeks. "I'm sorry. I can't go on." She left the room.
Thanks so much for this one - I enjoyed it more than all I've read of the story so far.
Apky
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2017
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I enjoyed the film. Where could I get the link? I'd like to post it on my FB page because I love the way it portrays tradition, with everything allotted their place and time. To me that's order.
She used to(the, her) fingers to count the greats.
How I became interested is through their son (? something missing here) was Elijah.
"This is worse than The Book of Matthew and all the begotten." Jeff grinned. ~ I grinned as well, with the same thoughts, hahaha...
"Basically anybody the Nazis didn't like or understand," added Philip. "It probably included Jehovah's Witness, Roman Catholics,(I don't think Roman Catholics got into the list of "unwanteds") or anybody who exhibited any socially deviant behavior."
"Correct." Shana continued, "The inmates worked twelve hour days at hard physical work, wore rags, never had enough to eat, and the risk of corporal punishment was imminent. Those who couldn't keep up were murdered. There was a name given to these people, Muselmanner, or living dead because of their appearance. They resembled round-shouldered skeletons." Tears rolled down her cheeks. "I'm sorry. I can't go on." She left the room.
Thanks so much for this one - I enjoyed it more than all I've read of the story so far.
Apky
Comment Written 09-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2017
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Roman Catholics were also targeted by Nazis. Thank you for the kind review and I made the corrections.
Comment from Thal1959
Very well written, and it holds the reader's attention. Only a few small writing errors, easy to fix.
"She used to fingers to count the greats..." (Typo - two fingers, not to fingers.)
"How I became interested is through their son was Elijah..." (Syntax is disordered. Either drop the word "was," or replace "is" with it; "How I became interested was through their son Elijah.")
"We were able to visit the Jewish Museum in Munich. It had just opened a few months before." (Just a tad ambiguous. It opened just a few months before what? I presume before you arrived there, but that should be mentioned.)
Other than these small things, the rest is quite good.
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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2017
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Very well written, and it holds the reader's attention. Only a few small writing errors, easy to fix.
"She used to fingers to count the greats..." (Typo - two fingers, not to fingers.)
"How I became interested is through their son was Elijah..." (Syntax is disordered. Either drop the word "was," or replace "is" with it; "How I became interested was through their son Elijah.")
"We were able to visit the Jewish Museum in Munich. It had just opened a few months before." (Just a tad ambiguous. It opened just a few months before what? I presume before you arrived there, but that should be mentioned.)
Other than these small things, the rest is quite good.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2017
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Thank you for the review. I have made the corrections.
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You're welcome - it was my pleasure.
Comment from rheabug
This story line is very interesting. I hate that all that happened during WW11. I just can't imagine the terror that a lot of people went through during that time. Thank you for sharing this chapter. hugs
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This story line is very interesting. I hate that all that happened during WW11. I just can't imagine the terror that a lot of people went through during that time. Thank you for sharing this chapter. hugs
Comment Written 09-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2017
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Barb
I like how you are continuing your story by going in the history of Shana's family in Germany, which I found is really intriguing to read
All I say is this chapter must be read.
Gert
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2017
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Barb
I like how you are continuing your story by going in the history of Shana's family in Germany, which I found is really intriguing to read
All I say is this chapter must be read.
Gert
Comment Written 09-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2017
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Thank you for the encouragement.
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You are welcome now you have a good get away
Gert