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The Incomparable Fanny Barnwarmer

Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "Incomparable Fanny Barnwarmer #6"
America's First Female Comic

34 total reviews 
Comment from Shirley McLain
Excellent
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I'm sorry, it's just too early for popcorn, and I don't drink sweet tea so you can get on with the story. :) You did a good job, and I am enjoying the read. Have a wonderful Sunday. Shirley

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2022

reply by the author on 10-Apr-2022
    Thank you, Shirley. I wish I could have brought the scene to its natural conclusion, but it would have taken another thousand words ... and no one's that patient. Good to see you back!
Comment from royowen
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You've developed a great mythology for a script, probably better suited to a movie or TV script, instruction side of it could be used for the director to move and instruct the actor in which to address his part, mind you actors are a diffident bunch, well done Jay, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2022

reply by the author on 10-Apr-2022
    Thank you, Roy. There's definitely more flexibility in a TV or movie script. But so much of this would have been told in flashback, much like Rose's story in The Titanic.
reply by royowen on 10-Apr-2022
    Yep
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

This was riveting.
I would like to stop there, as I have nothing else useful to add (the rating says it all). Unfortunately this site won't allow short reviews, even in the case of such a rating.

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2022

reply by the author on 10-Apr-2022
    Thank you, Katherine. I know what you mean about the rules for length of a review. I often wonder about how their bot recognizes a review as not being helpful when it is too short. Bless you, and thanks for the six. It does say it all!
Comment from dellsworthpoet
Excellent
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This is an intense telling of a story.

The interview format is well developed. The dialogue is believable. The language fits with the narrative. The images are crisp.

Thanks for a good read.

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 Comment Written 10-Apr-2022

reply by the author on 10-Apr-2022
    Thank you, my friend. I'm so pleased you stopped by and hope it's not just a quick peck on the cheek.
reply by dellsworthpoet on 10-Apr-2022
    You are welcome.