Saint Mary
This was one of my more memorable patients as a Chaplain.34 total reviews
Comment from NANCY V. FORREST
This story brought tears to my eyes. As a clinician I have worked with may "Mary"s. It is true miracle when they are able to find their way back from trauma and grief to reconnect with peace, whatever path it takes. You were both blessed.
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2021
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This story brought tears to my eyes. As a clinician I have worked with may "Mary"s. It is true miracle when they are able to find their way back from trauma and grief to reconnect with peace, whatever path it takes. You were both blessed.
Comment Written 11-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2021
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Thank You so much for the fantastic Review and those five Saturday afternoon Stars! You are so right about the effects of severe trauma such as what Mary went through. God stories are powerful.
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Comment from Carlos' girl
Dear Author:
this story is seemlessly written; it is flawless. You write exceptionally well.
My only suggestion is to break the story down more into slightly shorter paragraphs to make it a bit easier to read.
Well done.
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2021
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Dear Author:
this story is seemlessly written; it is flawless. You write exceptionally well.
My only suggestion is to break the story down more into slightly shorter paragraphs to make it a bit easier to read.
Well done.
Comment Written 11-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2021
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Thank You so much for the fantastic Review and those Six Saturday afternoon Stars! You are so right about the spacing. I took your Much Appreciated Advice and spent half an hour editing and creating white space. It reads easier now, thanks to you.
Comment from royowen
What an incredible story, and particularly sad concerning the 14 year old boy, how much suffering was he subjected to by these evil men, it must've been beyond belief. A great story of redemption and return to peace for Mary, but how loving was her daughter. Beautifully written my friend, thank you so much for sharing, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 11-Sep-2021
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What an incredible story, and particularly sad concerning the 14 year old boy, how much suffering was he subjected to by these evil men, it must've been beyond belief. A great story of redemption and return to peace for Mary, but how loving was her daughter. Beautifully written my friend, thank you so much for sharing, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 11-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2021
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I appreciate your reading, reviewing, and compassionate words to your brother. I value our interaction on FanStory. Your words are weighty and revealing. I spared all of us some of the most grotesque aspects of that horrendous event. Thanks Again Roy.
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Well done
Comment from SHABAMO
A fantastically written story of compassion, loss, and a chance for redemption even at the end. The way you tie in the end and give Mary that ultimate peace was well done.
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reply by the author on 11-Sep-2021
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A fantastically written story of compassion, loss, and a chance for redemption even at the end. The way you tie in the end and give Mary that ultimate peace was well done.
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Comment Written 11-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2021
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Thank You so much for the fantastic Review and those five Saturday afternoon Stars! You complements are much appreciated.