Comment from
Ulla
Hi Barbara, he really doesn't like parties does he, and yet, he does go ahead with it. I liked this a lot. Great and natural conversation. Can't see what's happening now albeit all the security. All the best. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 26-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2017
Thank you for the kind review. My internet service is being interrupted. I hope this gets to you.
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Ricky1024
hi Barbara I enjoyed this chapter was very well written rich and theme as well as imagery adjective content Matt well with object of content of red well flowed well with no grammar issues descriptive measures were present thanks for this doctor Ricky 1024
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Comment Written 26-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2017
Thank you for the encouragement. I appreciate it.