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Quiet Lawyer

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Can a broken heart be mended?

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Comment from BethShelby
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I like the interaction between Cord and Brent. It seems they have an understanding and Brent does have a problem with Cord caring about his daughter. It also sounds as if Cord would be okay with spending another day in New York but Ali is ready to leave. I enjoyed the chapter.

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 18-Sep-2022
    Thank you for the kind review. We'll see what happens.
Comment from Jasmine Girl
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I'm slowly getting into your new book. I need to read a few more chapters before really understand what's going on. It would be nice if you could use bigger font. We have a car repair shop where they claim that they'll fix anything except for a broken heart. I hope it will work out between Cordero and Alexandra?

Well done.

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 Comment Written 18-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 18-Sep-2022
    You can use the control and plus sign for larger font. I did for a while go into advanced editor and use larger font, but got so frustrated, I stopped, especially after I learned about control plus. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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I love protective fathers. My dad was like that. Embarrassing at the time, but I appreciated it when I was older. This is a nice family chapter, Barbara, and everyone is getting on well. I'm glad Alie is putting her jewellery in the safe at her parents house, I don't trust Alan, either. Now to see what Alie will decide, stay a day or go back. Well done, my friend. :)) Sandra xx

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 18-Sep-2022
    It will be interesting as this begins the slow evolution of things that happen. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from nomi338
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I love the interactions of the characters. They are normal and as the reader should expect them to occur. No sudden out of the blue events that do not match the overall direction of the story. This has a nice easygoing direction that is not dull or boring but it is a process of natural progression. I really like that.

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 Comment Written 18-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 18-Sep-2022
    Thank you so much for the encouragement. I really appreciate it.
reply by nomi338 on 18-Sep-2022
    Always. You should know by now, that as a reader I am hooked on you and your stories.
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2022
    Mucho gracious.
reply by nomi338 on 18-Sep-2022
    De nada.
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2022
    LOL