Football - A Novel
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Comment from judiverse
It looks like someone's keeping track of Katherine and Gabe's movements. She needs to be careful, and tell her to let him let his own coffee. She's finding herself faced with a lot of challenges, such as the time it will consume of she undertakes coaching track. And she has quite a few girls who are interested. Funny scene when Katherine enters the men's locker room and finds Gabe with the towel draped around him. Good work with it.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2021
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It looks like someone's keeping track of Katherine and Gabe's movements. She needs to be careful, and tell her to let him let his own coffee. She's finding herself faced with a lot of challenges, such as the time it will consume of she undertakes coaching track. And she has quite a few girls who are interested. Funny scene when Katherine enters the men's locker room and finds Gabe with the towel draped around him. Good work with it.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2021
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Ulla
Hi Barbara. I liked this chapter a lot. I was quite amused how embarrassed poor Katherine was seeing Gabriel just dressed in a towel.
Now, but that's is a by de by and has nothing to do with the written work. If Gabriel looks anything like the man in the picture I would run a mile and never look back. I like my men well toned, but not pumped up by steroids. Whack! I'm sorry that photo turns me off completely.
Otherwise, I'm looking forward to what's next. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2021
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Hi Barbara. I liked this chapter a lot. I was quite amused how embarrassed poor Katherine was seeing Gabriel just dressed in a towel.
Now, but that's is a by de by and has nothing to do with the written work. If Gabriel looks anything like the man in the picture I would run a mile and never look back. I like my men well toned, but not pumped up by steroids. Whack! I'm sorry that photo turns me off completely.
Otherwise, I'm looking forward to what's next. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 28-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2021
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Sankey
Phew! That was close! Hope Frosty wasn't spying someplace? I forgot he is not part of the school anymore. Another great chapter and as usual great reading and NO SPAGS!
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Phew! That was close! Hope Frosty wasn't spying someplace? I forgot he is not part of the school anymore. Another great chapter and as usual great reading and NO SPAGS!
Comment Written 28-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2021
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Thank you for the kind review.
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Dunno where Ulla is today she is usually posted before yours.
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I am sure she will be here.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That picture certainly caught my attention, if that's what Katherine saw, and that's how Gabe looks, I'm giving up writing and going into teaching!! LOL. The numbers for the cross-country runners are coming together, I'm sure she'll need help ... now I wonder who will be available!!!!!!? Nice one, Barbara, I'm still worried at the dog's growls. :)) Sandra xx
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That picture certainly caught my attention, if that's what Katherine saw, and that's how Gabe looks, I'm giving up writing and going into teaching!! LOL. The numbers for the cross-country runners are coming together, I'm sure she'll need help ... now I wonder who will be available!!!!!!? Nice one, Barbara, I'm still worried at the dog's growls. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 28-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2021
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The dog growls should worry you. LOL Yes, Katherine is shook up. I am wondering how she will handle it. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from eliz100
There is one sentence that is a little bumpy. It starts with "Dad announces the games. Otherwise you moved your story along. I continue to enjoy your use of space and font choice.
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There is one sentence that is a little bumpy. It starts with "Dad announces the games. Otherwise you moved your story along. I continue to enjoy your use of space and font choice.
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Comment Written 28-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2021
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I will recheck that sentence. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from nomi338
If that photo is accurate, I can understand her being flustered. I am a straight man, but I do know how the sight of a healthy buff man can affect a woman who has been separated or divorced from her husband might be affected by close proximity to a man that she is already growing close to. Let's just say that things might get a little challenging.
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If that photo is accurate, I can understand her being flustered. I am a straight man, but I do know how the sight of a healthy buff man can affect a woman who has been separated or divorced from her husband might be affected by close proximity to a man that she is already growing close to. Let's just say that things might get a little challenging.
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Comment Written 28-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2021
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His image does shake Katherine up, quite a bit. LOL Thank you for the kind review.
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Oh well. I guess that is just life. I can only imagine how I would feel if I came upon a scantily clad attractive woman by surprise.
Comment from Ben Colder
The shower bit should start the ball rolling in another direction. I saw the photo and thought of one of my boys. He was into the weight lifting and looked something like this.
Good one Barb.
I have been watching the girls soft-ball, thank God they are playing after all this world scare.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2021
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The shower bit should start the ball rolling in another direction. I saw the photo and thought of one of my boys. He was into the weight lifting and looked something like this.
Good one Barb.
I have been watching the girls soft-ball, thank God they are playing after all this world scare.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2021
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I do understand. My boys were hunks too. They played all sports and worked out daily, still do as adults. Thank you for the kind review.