Football - A Novel
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "Football Chapter 1 part 2"A mother faces life's struggles.
28 total reviews
Comment from Shirley McLain
An excellent chapter that I enjoyed reading. It was full of action and tension because of the stranger. You did a great job as always and I'm looking forward to reading more. Shirley
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2020
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An excellent chapter that I enjoyed reading. It was full of action and tension because of the stranger. You did a great job as always and I'm looking forward to reading more. Shirley
Comment Written 28-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2020
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from jusylee72
I have to admit I was a bit taken aback when your character let her son go off with a stranger, but having been a single mother, there is a part of me that understands that. This does keep me interested and your use of dialogue is well done. I will look for updates. Please stay safe and don't let kids go with strangers. lol.
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2020
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I have to admit I was a bit taken aback when your character let her son go off with a stranger, but having been a single mother, there is a part of me that understands that. This does keep me interested and your use of dialogue is well done. I will look for updates. Please stay safe and don't let kids go with strangers. lol.
Comment Written 28-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2020
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from eliz100
You have moved your story along beautifully. I always enjoy reading your work. I really like the length and the amount of space on the page. One thought - a cup of coffee just out of the urn causes second degree burns, a whole cup on a blouse, might need more than a bag of ice.
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2020
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You have moved your story along beautifully. I always enjoy reading your work. I really like the length and the amount of space on the page. One thought - a cup of coffee just out of the urn causes second degree burns, a whole cup on a blouse, might need more than a bag of ice.
Comment Written 28-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2020
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Wow, Barbara, your book has a wonderful start, and i am seeing the romance lurking in already:) Love this part:
"Ma'am, I was here first, so I'd say I'm not stalking you." He turned. "Nancy, could you put some ice in a baggy. She needs to cool the burn." He accepted the ice bag. "And two large coffees, one with cream and sugar on the side." He handed the ice to Katherine. "You'll need this." The real gentleman to the rescue.
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2020
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Wow, Barbara, your book has a wonderful start, and i am seeing the romance lurking in already:) Love this part:
"Ma'am, I was here first, so I'd say I'm not stalking you." He turned. "Nancy, could you put some ice in a baggy. She needs to cool the burn." He accepted the ice bag. "And two large coffees, one with cream and sugar on the side." He handed the ice to Katherine. "You'll need this." The real gentleman to the rescue.
Comment Written 28-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2020
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
I am loving this story. I found it intriguing from the first sentence to the last. I hope to read each writing as they are posted. Well written and enjoyable!
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2020
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I am loving this story. I found it intriguing from the first sentence to the last. I hope to read each writing as they are posted. Well written and enjoyable!
Comment Written 28-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2020
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Thank you for the kind review.
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You're very welcome!
Comment from Ric Myworld
Well, I can't believe Katherine allowed Jeremy to take off in the car with a total stranger. All the of credentials could have been fake. But "all's well that ends well." And if I were a gambler, I see a lot of good stuff coming in this story. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2020
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Well, I can't believe Katherine allowed Jeremy to take off in the car with a total stranger. All the of credentials could have been fake. But "all's well that ends well." And if I were a gambler, I see a lot of good stuff coming in this story. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 27-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2020
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I think you'd be right. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from seaglass
If only a tall handsome stranger could be in all our lives. The stuff good stories are made from. I'm enjoying your book. The son is authentic sounding in his protests to mum.
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2020
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If only a tall handsome stranger could be in all our lives. The stuff good stories are made from. I'm enjoying your book. The son is authentic sounding in his protests to mum.
Comment Written 27-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2020
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Ben Colder
Makes wish to know who this guy will turn out to be. Good write as always. This is a new pitch toward things but I must wait to see.
Good one Barb. I see nothing wrong.
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2020
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Makes wish to know who this guy will turn out to be. Good write as always. This is a new pitch toward things but I must wait to see.
Good one Barb. I see nothing wrong.
Comment Written 27-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2020
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Thank you for the kind review. I am praying you're feeling better.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Poor mum, she can't do anything right. Now we know these two will become an item, but she has four children, that's a lot to take on. I wonder if he has children. I'm liking this one, Barbara, but I wonder what the plot will be. I'm sure we'll all find out soon. Well done, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2020
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Poor mum, she can't do anything right. Now we know these two will become an item, but she has four children, that's a lot to take on. I wonder if he has children. I'm liking this one, Barbara, but I wonder what the plot will be. I'm sure we'll all find out soon. Well done, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 27-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2020
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Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from royowen
I'll bet the football coach is the man who bumped coffee on her blouse. A wonderful episode, it sounds comical, but I think God has His way of making sure people meet, I think this is one of those times. Well done, brilliantly written Barbara, Blessings Roy like
Suggestion, look at sentence. "On the way to practice, at Jordan's...."
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2020
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I'll bet the football coach is the man who bumped coffee on her blouse. A wonderful episode, it sounds comical, but I think God has His way of making sure people meet, I think this is one of those times. Well done, brilliantly written Barbara, Blessings Roy like
Suggestion, look at sentence. "On the way to practice, at Jordan's...."
Comment Written 27-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2020
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I will check that sentence out. I appreciate your review.
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Well done