Perennials of War
Viewing comments for Chapter 65 "Chapter Zwanzig part zwei"Is Anderson a gallant knight? Can he recover Shan
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Comment from Ulla
Hi Barbara, this is a lovely chapter, but I should be really angry with as you've left me hanging. How the security has been breached is beyond me. Well, I'll have to wait and see. Very well written. All the best. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018
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Hi Barbara, this is a lovely chapter, but I should be really angry with as you've left me hanging. How the security has been breached is beyond me. Well, I'll have to wait and see. Very well written. All the best. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 19-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from apky
An excellent post again. I'm glad to see that the relationship between Shana and Anderson is still progressing forward. Although she's perhaps by nature a distrusting person, perhaps there soon will be some movement in that direction too.
Otherwise it might turn too stilted and not that credible to the reader.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018
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An excellent post again. I'm glad to see that the relationship between Shana and Anderson is still progressing forward. Although she's perhaps by nature a distrusting person, perhaps there soon will be some movement in that direction too.
Otherwise it might turn too stilted and not that credible to the reader.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Sasha
Anderson's security is so tight, I find it strange that someone possibly got through it. Now we have to wait until the next post to learn exactly what has happened. Poor Shana, she obviously is filled with fear and conflict over her feelings for Anderson and how her father will react if he suspects she may be interested in pursuing a relationship with Anderson. Yes, King Lear was not her best choice in bedtime reading. Excellent work with this chapter and, hopefully, by the time you post the again, I will finally have my glasses. I have an appointment with my doctor this afternoon for the 'exam'... I can hardly wait.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018
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Anderson's security is so tight, I find it strange that someone possibly got through it. Now we have to wait until the next post to learn exactly what has happened. Poor Shana, she obviously is filled with fear and conflict over her feelings for Anderson and how her father will react if he suspects she may be interested in pursuing a relationship with Anderson. Yes, King Lear was not her best choice in bedtime reading. Excellent work with this chapter and, hopefully, by the time you post the again, I will finally have my glasses. I have an appointment with my doctor this afternoon for the 'exam'... I can hardly wait.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018
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I am so happy for your recovery. I can't wait for more 'rambles' . Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Now that was a cliff hanger, for sure! I liked how Anderson insisted on making the dinner, I don't have that problem, I let my husband do the cooking! lol. Whoever has turned the lights off, must know about all the security he has, Hmm, this could be really interesting. Well done, my friend. Another wonderful part. :) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018
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Now that was a cliff hanger, for sure! I liked how Anderson insisted on making the dinner, I don't have that problem, I let my husband do the cooking! lol. Whoever has turned the lights off, must know about all the security he has, Hmm, this could be really interesting. Well done, my friend. Another wonderful part. :) Sandra xx
Comment Written 19-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018
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Thank you for the kind review. I used to do all my families cooking, then I had breast cancer and during chemo I just didn't have the energy. I continued to work full time through it. My guys took over the cooking duty. Now, that I'm recovered and back to normal, whatever that is after cancer, my husband and I share cooking duties. He does it every other day.
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You are amazing! To have continued working through all that. I've see the effects of chemo through my daughter-in-law who is still going through it. I think it's nice that your husband continues to help with the cooking. Mine loves to cook, so who am I to argue! :)) xx
Comment from rtobaygo
Good morning, Barbara
Enjoyed the post. I like how you continue to reveal various aspects of each character's personality, philosophy es and mind set and to not only show their level of commitment but to create a thorough understanding of what they must overcome to see their efforts come to fruition. Well done.
Take care and stay safe,
Ray
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018
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Good morning, Barbara
Enjoyed the post. I like how you continue to reveal various aspects of each character's personality, philosophy es and mind set and to not only show their level of commitment but to create a thorough understanding of what they must overcome to see their efforts come to fruition. Well done.
Take care and stay safe,
Ray
Comment Written 19-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Oh, no! Just as he's checking on security someone cuts the electricity. Or maybe Shana plugged too many appliances into one outlet. You'll make me wait to find out what happened. I should remove four stars for that! :)
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018
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Oh, no! Just as he's checking on security someone cuts the electricity. Or maybe Shana plugged too many appliances into one outlet. You'll make me wait to find out what happened. I should remove four stars for that! :)
Comment Written 19-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018
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LOL I always enjoy reading your reviews.
Comment from Ric Myworld
Any time the lights go out, it's not a good thing whether something is up or not. Thanks for sharing another fine chapter, and I'm looking forward to the conversation with Benjamin. Great chapter. :-)
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018
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Any time the lights go out, it's not a good thing whether something is up or not. Thanks for sharing another fine chapter, and I'm looking forward to the conversation with Benjamin. Great chapter. :-)
Comment Written 18-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018
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Thank you for the kind review. Benjamin has a few tricks up his sleeve. LOL
Comment from Ben Colder
WOW! What a cliff hanger. So we may have some intruders . Like this. You are moving this story into something very interesting. Good one Barb. Never seen anything worth mentioning. All sing a strong song.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018
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WOW! What a cliff hanger. So we may have some intruders . Like this. You are moving this story into something very interesting. Good one Barb. Never seen anything worth mentioning. All sing a strong song.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
Good job of leaving us in suspense and wanting more. Yes, wrong book indeed. I must say how much I agree with this statement: "That's a sad statement about our society." Well written chapter, my friend~Debbie
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2018
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Good job of leaving us in suspense and wanting more. Yes, wrong book indeed. I must say how much I agree with this statement: "That's a sad statement about our society." Well written chapter, my friend~Debbie
Comment Written 18-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2018
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LOL I agree one hundred percent. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Barb
What I really liked was the conversation between Shana and Anderson ex.
when Anderson said, "You don't trust me, yet, do you?" (when he grabbed Shana' s for some reason to me was not right!
And again you are very good knowing when to leave us readers hanging
Gert
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2018
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Hello Barb
What I really liked was the conversation between Shana and Anderson ex.
when Anderson said, "You don't trust me, yet, do you?" (when he grabbed Shana' s for some reason to me was not right!
And again you are very good knowing when to leave us readers hanging
Gert
Comment Written 18-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2018
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He was protecting her, but I will recheck this area. Thank you for the kind review.