Perennials of War
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Comment from Mustang Patty
I'm glad Shana now knows what is going on. The account of what could happen if they were to find out WHAT the painting is being held for is interesting. I had to chuckle at the notion of the mafia being willing to 'trade.' Thank you for sharing this chapter, and I look forward to more,
~patty~
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2017
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I'm glad Shana now knows what is going on. The account of what could happen if they were to find out WHAT the painting is being held for is interesting. I had to chuckle at the notion of the mafia being willing to 'trade.' Thank you for sharing this chapter, and I look forward to more,
~patty~
Comment Written 27-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2017
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
A well-written chapter that moves the story along,
the plot flowing well, Barbara.
Natural dialogue throughout - I'm left wondering if
Anderson and Shana come to the same conclusion on
a course of action.
Blessings,
Margaret
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2017
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A well-written chapter that moves the story along,
the plot flowing well, Barbara.
Natural dialogue throughout - I'm left wondering if
Anderson and Shana come to the same conclusion on
a course of action.
Blessings,
Margaret
Comment Written 27-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2017
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We will have to wait and see. Thank you for dropping by and leaving this wonderful review.
Comment from rtobaygo
Good morning, Barbara
Per usual enjoyed the post. The seemingly innocent give-and-take between your characters at the beginning belies the seriousness of the unfolding situation .
Take care and stay safe,
Ray
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2017
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Good morning, Barbara
Per usual enjoyed the post. The seemingly innocent give-and-take between your characters at the beginning belies the seriousness of the unfolding situation .
Take care and stay safe,
Ray
Comment Written 27-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2017
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Thank you for the encouraging review.
Comment from mbroyles2
Another great chapter that moves the story along.
It will be interesting to see if Shana and Anderson can agree on a course of action.
Wonderful dialogue between the group.
Michael
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2017
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Another great chapter that moves the story along.
It will be interesting to see if Shana and Anderson can agree on a course of action.
Wonderful dialogue between the group.
Michael
Comment Written 27-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2017
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I am wondering the same thing. My characters don't always tell me where they're going until I'm writing. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from bookishfabler
Very good. Another great chapter. I saw no nits or spags to mention. Sorry I wasn't more help with your back cover.
I may be gone for a few days at the end of the week. We will be moving and have lots to do. I shall be back though.
hugs Heidi
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2017
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Very good. Another great chapter. I saw no nits or spags to mention. Sorry I wasn't more help with your back cover.
I may be gone for a few days at the end of the week. We will be moving and have lots to do. I shall be back though.
hugs Heidi
Comment Written 27-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2017
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Not a problem. I always appreciate hearing from you. I know you have a life outside of FS.
Comment from apky
This may be just the way the person talked, but I thought to show it to you just in case. "Cawlm down."
Still following the story and enjoying it. The characters are very indoor-y so I look forward to see them out and about!
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2017
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This may be just the way the person talked, but I thought to show it to you just in case. "Cawlm down."
Still following the story and enjoying it. The characters are very indoor-y so I look forward to see them out and about!
Comment Written 27-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2017
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I have no idea how that 'w' got in there, I promise it wasn't the way I wrote it. I think gremlins did it. LOL Thank you for the kind review.
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Yeah, Barbara, I know them gremlins. Got a fine buncha my own all over the place!
Comment from giraffmang
Hi Barbara,
So things look to be moving forward quite quickly now. Shana starting to feel a little side-lined by the end?
"Cawlm down." Anderson's eyes met hers - Calm.
important to this Morzov man / feeling Marzov isn't interested - different spelling here.
All the best
G
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2017
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Hi Barbara,
So things look to be moving forward quite quickly now. Shana starting to feel a little side-lined by the end?
"Cawlm down." Anderson's eyes met hers - Calm.
important to this Morzov man / feeling Marzov isn't interested - different spelling here.
All the best
G
Comment Written 27-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2017
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I have no idea how that 'w' got in there, I promise it wasn't the way I wrote it. I think gremlins did it. LOL Neither one of the spelling is correct, it's supposed to me Morozov. Where was my head? Thank you for the catches.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Excellent, Barbara. Your characters are so natural, the plot flows so well, it keeps the tension with a dash of humour, and gets better all the time! Now, what is the next step? And what is the painting really hiding? Superb, my friend! :) Sandra xx
"Ca(w)lm down." Anderson's eyes met hers.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2017
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Excellent, Barbara. Your characters are so natural, the plot flows so well, it keeps the tension with a dash of humour, and gets better all the time! Now, what is the next step? And what is the painting really hiding? Superb, my friend! :) Sandra xx
"Ca(w)lm down." Anderson's eyes met hers.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2017
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I have no idea how that 'w' got in there, I promise it wasn't the way I wrote it. I think gremlins did it. LOL Thank you for the catch.
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They are pesky nuisances aren't they, lol!! xx
Comment from Sankey
Good read again, thanks and looking forward to more.Wondering about the following...hehe"Ca[w]lm down." Anderson's eyes met hers. Is that his New York or something accent or a typo? I guess after seeing Anderson puts on different accents, maybe what I picked up before was just that?
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2017
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Good read again, thanks and looking forward to more.Wondering about the following...hehe"Ca[w]lm down." Anderson's eyes met hers. Is that his New York or something accent or a typo? I guess after seeing Anderson puts on different accents, maybe what I picked up before was just that?
Comment Written 27-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2017
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I have no idea how that 'w' got in there, I promise it wasn't the way I wrote it. I think gremlins did it. LOL Thank you for the catch.
Comment from MelB
"Cawlm down." Anderson's eyes met hers. - Ca[w]lm
Things are heating up with them just now truly figuring out how much trouble they could be in and that they are not dealing with nice people at all.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2017
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"Cawlm down." Anderson's eyes met hers. - Ca[w]lm
Things are heating up with them just now truly figuring out how much trouble they could be in and that they are not dealing with nice people at all.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2017
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I have no idea how that 'w' got in there, I promise it wasn't the way I wrote it. I think gremlins did it. LOL Thank you for the catch.