Quiet Lawyer
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Comment from Ric Myworld
Yes, it looks as if it was one of those times where they needed to keep themselves in restraints. LOL. But I'm use with the storyteller, everything will be kept in check. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
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Yes, it looks as if it was one of those times where they needed to keep themselves in restraints. LOL. But I'm use with the storyteller, everything will be kept in check. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
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Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from Ulla
We'll, now we are finally getting to the point. It's heating up nicely. Cordero and Ali keep on dancing around each other. I hope they soon get to where they need to be. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
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We'll, now we are finally getting to the point. It's heating up nicely. Cordero and Ali keep on dancing around each other. I hope they soon get to where they need to be. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 05-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
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Thank you for the kind review. It's going to be rocky before they get it right.
Comment from Sally Law
Romance is in the air! Loving this development and hopefully Cordero will pop the question soon. He's certainly smitten. A lot is going on and I think they would handle better as a couple. There's strength in that, I believe.
Wonderful chapter, my friend, and addition to your book.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
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Romance is in the air! Loving this development and hopefully Cordero will pop the question soon. He's certainly smitten. A lot is going on and I think they would handle better as a couple. There's strength in that, I believe.
Wonderful chapter, my friend, and addition to your book.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs
Comment Written 05-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
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Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from Ricky1024
This "Quiet Lawyer Chapter" was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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My Complete Synopsis:
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Thanks for sharing this and have a blessed Sabbath Sunday!
Doctor Ricky
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
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This "Quiet Lawyer Chapter" was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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My Complete Synopsis:
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Thanks for sharing this and have a blessed Sabbath Sunday!
Doctor Ricky
Comment Written 05-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Wish you every success in your chosen action and the first novel, how love changes life; in this chapter you have ably, clearly and wisely shown how Ali chances to initiate an intimate moment, of course, Alexandra is a good, passionate lawyer; nothing goes wrong, and the stories moves on in romantic maturation; well said, ALCREATOR LITT DEAR
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
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Wish you every success in your chosen action and the first novel, how love changes life; in this chapter you have ably, clearly and wisely shown how Ali chances to initiate an intimate moment, of course, Alexandra is a good, passionate lawyer; nothing goes wrong, and the stories moves on in romantic maturation; well said, ALCREATOR LITT DEAR
Comment Written 05-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Sanku
I read the previous and this chapter at a stretch .Alexandra once again proved to be a brilliant lawyer once again in the last chapter and in this chapter the romance is reaching a high .Cordero better marry her soon You have a brilliant closing line hope he proposes soon.
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
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I read the previous and this chapter at a stretch .Alexandra once again proved to be a brilliant lawyer once again in the last chapter and in this chapter the romance is reaching a high .Cordero better marry her soon You have a brilliant closing line hope he proposes soon.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
The romantic tension escalates! Stunning closing scene. At first, I misread it as "I think you'd better (come in). I commend you for not taking the salacious path.
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
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The romantic tension escalates! Stunning closing scene. At first, I misread it as "I think you'd better (come in). I commend you for not taking the salacious path.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
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Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from nomi338
I agree with Cord's thinking. H e had better marry her as soon as possible before things get out of hand. It appears to me that they are in a dangerous position, I think that they both want more from each other, but are afraid to give in to their base desires. Marriage seems to be the obvious answer to everything.
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
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I agree with Cord's thinking. H e had better marry her as soon as possible before things get out of hand. It appears to me that they are in a dangerous position, I think that they both want more from each other, but are afraid to give in to their base desires. Marriage seems to be the obvious answer to everything.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
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I agree, but they still have the NYC and Texas issue. Thank you for your support.
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No matter what, I believe they must pull the trigger and do the deal before much more transpires.
Comment from Nicki Nance
I enjoyed chapter 28. You revealed a lot about your characters in the dialog, especially the many dimensions of Alexandria. I would definitely read on.
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
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I enjoyed chapter 28. You revealed a lot about your characters in the dialog, especially the many dimensions of Alexandria. I would definitely read on.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Jay Squires
Maybe you can tell me why you would wait until Saturday of the day before we get our 6s replenished to post your story! Consider yourself mildly chided. Luckily, this wasn't the first time you've done this, so I stiffened my resolve and kept a six hidden away for this post. I can see why you have so few chapters left. This is starting to get hot and heavy between them. I see your next post is coming out next Thursday. I can't guarantee anything. I'm sure that one way or another, I'll enjoy the read.
Jay
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
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Maybe you can tell me why you would wait until Saturday of the day before we get our 6s replenished to post your story! Consider yourself mildly chided. Luckily, this wasn't the first time you've done this, so I stiffened my resolve and kept a six hidden away for this post. I can see why you have so few chapters left. This is starting to get hot and heavy between them. I see your next post is coming out next Thursday. I can't guarantee anything. I'm sure that one way or another, I'll enjoy the read.
Jay
Comment Written 04-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
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I'm posting every five days until I get this novel finished. 3 more to go. My next post will be Thursday the 9th. Thank you for the kind review.