Quiet Lawyer
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Comment from Annette R.
Without any spelling, typos or grammatical errors it is hard to give any constructive suggestions. I haven't read any other chapters. I do appreciate the larger font and separation of paragraphs. It is an interesting and well written piece.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2022
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Without any spelling, typos or grammatical errors it is hard to give any constructive suggestions. I haven't read any other chapters. I do appreciate the larger font and separation of paragraphs. It is an interesting and well written piece.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2022
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
I enjoyed reading another chapter, which is equally well written. Your have a way with words that spills over into the dialogue you write. It reads very authentically. Well done.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2022
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I enjoyed reading another chapter, which is equally well written. Your have a way with words that spills over into the dialogue you write. It reads very authentically. Well done.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2022
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Judy Lawless
This is a lovely chapter, Barbara. The dialogue and little physical exchanges flow well. I'm glad Cord insisted on making Ali listen to the truth about Maggie and Amy, and now we know why Pat has been stalking Ali. Great writing.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2022
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This is a lovely chapter, Barbara. The dialogue and little physical exchanges flow well. I'm glad Cord insisted on making Ali listen to the truth about Maggie and Amy, and now we know why Pat has been stalking Ali. Great writing.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2022
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Pat is a very bad person, and you will discover in about two weeks. Thank you for the kind review.
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You?re most welcome, Barbara. I?ll be waiting for the next installment
Comment from AJ McCall
This story is just soooo SWEET! And the bigger font is SO easy on the eyes!
Hey Barbara! I know I haven't reviewed much of THIS particular story but I LOVE IT! Cordero is such a gentleman and a sweetheart. I can't wait to see what happens!
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2022
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This story is just soooo SWEET! And the bigger font is SO easy on the eyes!
Hey Barbara! I know I haven't reviewed much of THIS particular story but I LOVE IT! Cordero is such a gentleman and a sweetheart. I can't wait to see what happens!
Comment Written 27-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2022
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Thank you for the kind and encouragement.
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You're welcome!!
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Sure, glad they (Alexandra and Cord) worked out their disagreement. It sounds like life on a ranch has the same up and downs as any other life; except they have no Big Apple.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2022
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Sure, glad they (Alexandra and Cord) worked out their disagreement. It sounds like life on a ranch has the same up and downs as any other life; except they have no Big Apple.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2022
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Very true. Thank you for the kind review. But will Ali be happy without the Big Apple????
Comment from BethShelby
I'm glad that misunderstanding was straightened out. It would seem what he told her would be enough to ensure that she would never be interested in Pat. I guess those are the mysterious lights I've heard of against the back drop of the mountain. It does seem like a romantic night. I'm enjoying this story. I also looking forward to another chapter on the football story at some point to know things work out.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2022
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I'm glad that misunderstanding was straightened out. It would seem what he told her would be enough to ensure that she would never be interested in Pat. I guess those are the mysterious lights I've heard of against the back drop of the mountain. It does seem like a romantic night. I'm enjoying this story. I also looking forward to another chapter on the football story at some point to know things work out.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2022
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from royowen
So this Maggie was never Cordero's girlfriend but she merely won him in a date raffle, which is very strange indeed. I can see how she became insecure, because of her recent heartbreak. I think women need to be secure in the knowledge they are the only one. Beautifully written, I know you are faithful because you most, if not all my posts, thank you Barbara. Great episode, Blessings Roy
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2022
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So this Maggie was never Cordero's girlfriend but she merely won him in a date raffle, which is very strange indeed. I can see how she became insecure, because of her recent heartbreak. I think women need to be secure in the knowledge they are the only one. Beautifully written, I know you are faithful because you most, if not all my posts, thank you Barbara. Great episode, Blessings Roy
Comment Written 27-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2022
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Thank you for understanding.
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Well done
Comment from Sankey
This was a great read with plenty of drama. Always looking forward to your offerings. Where's the football story? A couple of spags.The drive to Marfa remained silent.["]
This is (a)very small town."
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2022
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This was a great read with plenty of drama. Always looking forward to your offerings. Where's the football story? A couple of spags.The drive to Marfa remained silent.["]
This is (a)very small town."
Comment Written 27-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2022
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The football story ended last week. Sorry. Some people are asking for an epilogue. I'm still considering it. Thank you for the kind review. I will get on those corrections.
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Ah yes, but an Epilogue would be nice.
Comment from eliz100
This is a great chapter full of twists and turns. Interesting from beginning to end. There is no room for improvement. I did take all your advice on The Crash. It would be really helpful to me, if you read it again.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2022
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This is a great chapter full of twists and turns. Interesting from beginning to end. There is no room for improvement. I did take all your advice on The Crash. It would be really helpful to me, if you read it again.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2022
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Thank you for the kind review and I only want to help others.
Comment from Shirley McLain
Here's your six for another great chapter. I am enjoying this story. You've kept it active, and it certainly holds my attention until the last word. I'm always left wanting more. Enjoy whats left of your Sunday. Shirley
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2022
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Here's your six for another great chapter. I am enjoying this story. You've kept it active, and it certainly holds my attention until the last word. I'm always left wanting more. Enjoy whats left of your Sunday. Shirley
Comment Written 27-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2022
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Thank you for the great encouragement.