Football - A Novel
Viewing comments for Chapter 75 "Football Chapter 46"A mother faces life's struggles.
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Comment from Jasmine Girl
I can't wait for the real date Katherine and Gabriel are going to have. I'm just wondering why I turn to forget the fact that Katherine has cancer. Maybe you made her like a normal person. It's just a suggestion.
Well done.
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2022
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I can't wait for the real date Katherine and Gabriel are going to have. I'm just wondering why I turn to forget the fact that Katherine has cancer. Maybe you made her like a normal person. It's just a suggestion.
Well done.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2022
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Thank you for the kind review. I have no idea why you forget Katherine has cancer.
Comment from lancellot
Hmm, another well written chapter. I'm sure the last chapter will have them formally get engaged.
Most of your characters are all good people, kind, helpful people, except the bad ones, they are what they are written to be, just bad, but not evil.
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2022
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Hmm, another well written chapter. I'm sure the last chapter will have them formally get engaged.
Most of your characters are all good people, kind, helpful people, except the bad ones, they are what they are written to be, just bad, but not evil.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2022
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There are actually very few truly evil people in the world. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from nomi338
I dearly love most of the characters in this heartwarming story. The villains of course, I hate completely. Katherine and Gabriel have genuine friends who are there for them 24.7. They are blessed by the growing love and respect they feel and display whenever they are together.
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2022
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I dearly love most of the characters in this heartwarming story. The villains of course, I hate completely. Katherine and Gabriel have genuine friends who are there for them 24.7. They are blessed by the growing love and respect they feel and display whenever they are together.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2022
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Thank you for the kind support.
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I am so pleased that God allows you to continue to produce the wonderful content that blesses all of your loyal and happy readers.
Comment from Judy Lawless
I like this chapter, Barbara. It seems everyone is trying to help Katherine see that she and Gabriel are a good thing, that he truly loves her and the boys. Maybe she's finally seeing it herself. You've done a great job of portraying this.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2022
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I like this chapter, Barbara. It seems everyone is trying to help Katherine see that she and Gabriel are a good thing, that he truly loves her and the boys. Maybe she's finally seeing it herself. You've done a great job of portraying this.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2022
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Thyank you for the kind review.
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You're most welcome, Barbara.
Comment from judiverse
It's best if Katherine doesn't return to teaching just yet. She'll have to have a sub when she's undergoing chemotherapy, so she'll probably have to take time off then. She doesn't want to start chemotherapy feeling weak. I hope it turns out all right for her. Great work with the characters. You do an excellent job of showing Gabriel's relationship with Katherine's sons. Great artwork choice to go along with Jeremy and his issue of cleaning his room. judi
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2022
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It's best if Katherine doesn't return to teaching just yet. She'll have to have a sub when she's undergoing chemotherapy, so she'll probably have to take time off then. She doesn't want to start chemotherapy feeling weak. I hope it turns out all right for her. Great work with the characters. You do an excellent job of showing Gabriel's relationship with Katherine's sons. Great artwork choice to go along with Jeremy and his issue of cleaning his room. judi
Comment Written 13-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2022
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Wendy G
I hope your visit is going well. I am happy to read this new chapter, and see the development in your plot and characters, as they deal with all the issues that arise. Well written and interesting, as your work always is.
Wendy
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2022
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I hope your visit is going well. I am happy to read this new chapter, and see the development in your plot and characters, as they deal with all the issues that arise. Well written and interesting, as your work always is.
Wendy
Comment Written 13-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2022
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Ben Colder
Sorry to be tardy reading your work. So said about cancer. I hope it will be ok and these people can get on with their lives.
Been out of commission but trying to get back but not sure.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2022
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Sorry to be tardy reading your work. So said about cancer. I hope it will be ok and these people can get on with their lives.
Been out of commission but trying to get back but not sure.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2022
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I hope you are okay. When you're out of commission, I worry about you. Thank you for reading.
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Thank you. At my age, I do try. I depend strongly on the Lord. My blessings to you, dear friend. I posted something I did years ago as a script but later changed it to a story. It is not a bad story, and I hope to keep it going to the end.
Comment from Anne Johnston
I enjoyed this chapter very much. Looks like things are coming to a head, and that everything will work out for these two. I love the picture you found to illustrate this chapter. Guess all boys are the same when it comes to keeping their rooms clean.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2022
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I enjoyed this chapter very much. Looks like things are coming to a head, and that everything will work out for these two. I love the picture you found to illustrate this chapter. Guess all boys are the same when it comes to keeping their rooms clean.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2022
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Thank you for the kind review.
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You are welcome
Comment from eliz100
I love the picture. It is so right for this story. This is another great chapter. You moved the story along quite nicely. Your characters have depth. I look forward to the next chapter.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2022
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I love the picture. It is so right for this story. This is another great chapter. You moved the story along quite nicely. Your characters have depth. I look forward to the next chapter.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2022
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Ulla
Hi Barbara, that was a wonderful read and it really shows how much Gabriel loves Katherine. Very well written. I'm so glad you have Internet at your mum's. I hope you enjoy your time there. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2022
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Hi Barbara, that was a wonderful read and it really shows how much Gabriel loves Katherine. Very well written. I'm so glad you have Internet at your mum's. I hope you enjoy your time there. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 13-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2022
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Thank you for the kind review.