The Surprise
100 Word Flash Fiction Contest Entry2 total reviews
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Love, expression and act in appreciation of love and gesture in manifestation of love is important and not the amount of gift or material offer or show, simplicity and natural expressiveness surprises sometime as token of love in relation; well said, well done; enjoyed the read; thanks for sharing this, sponsoring membership.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
Love, expression and act in appreciation of love and gesture in manifestation of love is important and not the amount of gift or material offer or show, simplicity and natural expressiveness surprises sometime as token of love in relation; well said, well done; enjoyed the read; thanks for sharing this, sponsoring membership.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
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Thank you for the great review and generous stars, Al. I really appreciate you taking the time to read this silly piece.
Comment from Mary Kay Bonfante
Hahahaha! I'm glad you're not really such a fool as your main character. His wife might have wanted to throw the breakfast at him, unless she was very, very forgiving. I personally wouldn't have minded a nice breakfast in bed, but knowing my husband had wasted $200 on lottery tickets might have spoiled my appetite. It's a crazy story, but well done! Could anybody be that stupid? Just consider the divorce rate.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
Hahahaha! I'm glad you're not really such a fool as your main character. His wife might have wanted to throw the breakfast at him, unless she was very, very forgiving. I personally wouldn't have minded a nice breakfast in bed, but knowing my husband had wasted $200 on lottery tickets might have spoiled my appetite. It's a crazy story, but well done! Could anybody be that stupid? Just consider the divorce rate.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
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Lol. Thank you for the fantastic review, Mary. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you had a chuckle at this silly piece. Have a great rest of your weekend.
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You're very welcome. I did enjoy your funny story. Blessings!