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Aquaman

au bord du mer

6 total reviews 
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written hundred-word flash fiction about the aquaman who protects be ocean from people and objects that use the ocean as a playing ground and sometimes a dumping site.

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 26-Feb-2020
    Thak you
Comment from Sharon Haiste
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I think this is a good entry for the 100 Word Flash Fiction writing prompt.
This short story tells of an encounter with Aquaman.
Well done and I wish you luck with the contest.
Sharon

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 26-Feb-2020
    Thank you so much Sharon, and so sorry for my delay I was away with almost no internet
Comment from Cindy Warren
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I kind of agree with Mr. Aquaman. Why are there no fish, no birds. If it's God's property, maybe we should show it a little more respect. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 15-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 26-Feb-2020
    Thank you so much Cindy, and so sorry for my delay I was away with almost no internet. How are the dragons doing:)
Comment from Bill Pinder
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Thanks for sharing this short story about Aquaman and his experience in the ocean. I guess you are a big fan of him as well as the ocean in general. Bill

 Comment Written 15-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 26-Feb-2020
    Thank you so much Mr. Bill, and so sorry for my delay I was away with almost no internet
reply by Bill Pinder on 27-Feb-2020
Comment from Precious Owuamalam
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Super read! Reminds me of Injustice 2! A wonderful piece of writing for the contest. Very rich in content and style. Wish you the best in the contest.

 Comment Written 15-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 26-Feb-2020
    Thank you so much, and so sorry for my delay I was away with almost no internet
Comment from Mary Kay Bonfante
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Very interesting, exciting confrontation between you, an ordinary mortal, and Aquaman, who I think is known as some kind of superhero or a god. Aquaman is very aggressive here, and not happy with humanity, but you're not backing down! I love how you tell him that the ocean is God's property and you call him "water boy." I don't know what will come of this showdown, but if you can call his bluff, maybe he'll leave you be!

 Comment Written 15-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 26-Feb-2020
    Thank you so much, and so sorry for my delay I was away with almost no internet
reply by Mary Kay Bonfante on 26-Feb-2020
    You're very welcome! Thank you for explaining, and of course I understand :-)