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Bees Die We Die.

A six word story..no poetry

4 total reviews 
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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This is a poignant write and a powerful six worder that made me think and having read all the entries this is my favourite, so I give you my votes with pleasure and wish you luck, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 06-Oct-2019
    My ex-boss had bees and she sold her produce..she had 8 types of honey .. acacia is the most common and the sweetest. I prefer the honeydew honey ..it has a particular taste which combines well with ricotto. ( yummy )

    Sadly, the death of bees in my country has been an ongoing issue for many years now.

Comment from NickieT
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As a biologist this one hit me right in the feels. While the colors are bright and fun, the message is very serious and too often ignored. I am glad that you used this prompt as a chance to spread the word!

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 06-Oct-2019
    MY ex-boss is in the bee business she has several families and we noticed their decline.

    It's already been over 12 -13 years a well-known issue in my country...so tiny and yet so precious to our survival.

    I chose the artwork carefully ..I wanted to show how beautiful this creature is.
Comment from humpwhistle
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Ah, you speak the truth. And our bees are in danger. I live adjacent to an orchard. Bees play a critical role there, and everywhere else pollination is critical. Nice, timely idea.

Best of luck.

Peace, Lee


 Comment Written 03-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 06-Oct-2019
    Sadly the history of the bees for the last 12/13 years has been an ongoing tragedy.

    Living near an orchard you, of course, eyewitnessed their decline in first person.

    Even barn swallows have declined ..we have polluted our world and now we are reaping what we sowed.
Comment from Raul1
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This poem proves a point that we need bees to make honey. I think that this poem has a chance of winning the contest! Excellent work! Good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2019