Quiet Lawyer
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Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Oh dear, I'm guessing that the creep from hell is back again. I think he will find he has picked on the wrong man, and will soon know it. I'm glad that I only have today to wait to read what happens. I hope Cord knocks the stuffing out of him, and some! Just when things were getting interesting, too. That Griffin needs to throw himself under a but! Great chapter again, Barbara. I think things are coming close to Ali making her mind up where she wants to be for the rest of her life. Well done again!! :)) Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2022
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Oh dear, I'm guessing that the creep from hell is back again. I think he will find he has picked on the wrong man, and will soon know it. I'm glad that I only have today to wait to read what happens. I hope Cord knocks the stuffing out of him, and some! Just when things were getting interesting, too. That Griffin needs to throw himself under a but! Great chapter again, Barbara. I think things are coming close to Ali making her mind up where she wants to be for the rest of her life. Well done again!! :)) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 22-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2022
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We will see Griffin again and it won't be could. It will take a few posts to get there. LOL Thank you for the wonderful support.
Comment from Fleedleflump
I love 'graduation of intensity' - what a beautiful phrase. Yiu've handled this chapter beautifully because, after their kiss and sizzle moment, they feel more at ease with one another. This feels like it should - like relationships do. I really enjoyed this chapter.
Mike
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2022
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I love 'graduation of intensity' - what a beautiful phrase. Yiu've handled this chapter beautifully because, after their kiss and sizzle moment, they feel more at ease with one another. This feels like it should - like relationships do. I really enjoyed this chapter.
Mike
Comment Written 20-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2022
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Thank you for the encouragement. I have reviewers who want them in bed. I don't see that.
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Not everyone's a horndog, lol. It's a shame romance and sex get so intertwined. They're both great, of course, but I like that you've focused on their full mutual attraction- not just physical.
Mike
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I go for the unconditional love.
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The best kind :-)
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I agree.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Sorry, couldn't help; romance fiction goes on smoothly, plotted concordantly, small but sound; I enjoyed the dialogues, so appropriate and realistic; feelings well splashed; well said, well done, post god speed more, share post not 4 self-joy-pride but 4 God and readers worldwide Alcreator Litt Dear (DR)
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2022
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Sorry, couldn't help; romance fiction goes on smoothly, plotted concordantly, small but sound; I enjoyed the dialogues, so appropriate and realistic; feelings well splashed; well said, well done, post god speed more, share post not 4 self-joy-pride but 4 God and readers worldwide Alcreator Litt Dear (DR)
Comment Written 19-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2022
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
I guess they were still being followed. The bad fellow has arrived on the scene before they even get on the plane. Now what? Is Cord going to act out of defensiveness or is he going to stay calm?
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2022
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I guess they were still being followed. The bad fellow has arrived on the scene before they even get on the plane. Now what? Is Cord going to act out of defensiveness or is he going to stay calm?
Comment Written 18-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2022
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Thank you for the kind review. Alan will show up again and it's not good.
Comment from Brett Matthew West
First paragraph indicates Cordero still not sure how he feels about committing one hundred percent to Alexandra.
Alexandra is definitely a goner for Cord though.
That punch was completely unexpected, but will move the action along no doubt.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2022
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First paragraph indicates Cordero still not sure how he feels about committing one hundred percent to Alexandra.
Alexandra is definitely a goner for Cord though.
That punch was completely unexpected, but will move the action along no doubt.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2022
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from estory
This was a strong chapter. You had a sizzling love scene there and it really just revolved around kissing, so it stayed pretty romantic and didn't get raunchy at all. As always the dialogue was realistic, well polished, and we get insights into the souls and characters of people, their emotions as they move through relationships. Plenty of detail made for a delicious course of romance, I would say. Great job. estory
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2022
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This was a strong chapter. You had a sizzling love scene there and it really just revolved around kissing, so it stayed pretty romantic and didn't get raunchy at all. As always the dialogue was realistic, well polished, and we get insights into the souls and characters of people, their emotions as they move through relationships. Plenty of detail made for a delicious course of romance, I would say. Great job. estory
Comment Written 17-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2022
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Ric Myworld
Now this is the way I like your stories best. Offering up a little teasing, rub, touch, and tickle. A kiss or two and then, Ka-Pow, right back to the action, keeping me wanting to get back to the smackie-mouth business. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2022
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Now this is the way I like your stories best. Offering up a little teasing, rub, touch, and tickle. A kiss or two and then, Ka-Pow, right back to the action, keeping me wanting to get back to the smackie-mouth business. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2022
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LOL Thank you for your review. It brightened my day.
Comment from amahra
Liked this chapter. Some things I also liked below:
"She doesn't weight that much." [Did you mean, "She doesn't [weigh that much?"]
"No chance of witnessing the wet T-shirt contest Mom and you discussed. [I loved this line of him flirting.]
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2022
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Liked this chapter. Some things I also liked below:
"She doesn't weight that much." [Did you mean, "She doesn't [weigh that much?"]
"No chance of witnessing the wet T-shirt contest Mom and you discussed. [I loved this line of him flirting.]
Comment Written 17-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2022
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Yes, Cord can be a tease, but he has to be careful with Ali. Thank you for the catch. I've made the correction. I appreciate the review.
Comment from John Ciarmello
An exciting chapter and Cord's kiss was a long time coming. An enjoyable read, and we can only imagine who laid the fist on Cordero. Best, JohnC
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2022
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An exciting chapter and Cord's kiss was a long time coming. An enjoyable read, and we can only imagine who laid the fist on Cordero. Best, JohnC
Comment Written 17-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2022
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LOL Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from lyenochka
Oh-oh. Griffin has interrupted their lovely breakfast dance! (I'm guessing because, who else could it be?) Great way to get their romance rising to the next level. Hope the fist fight won't last long!
This sentence struck me as odd as I think "orneriness" feels negative:
Orneriness filled his eyes as they met hers. "I heard that."
Maybe: Playfulness flashed in his eyes which met hers
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2022
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Oh-oh. Griffin has interrupted their lovely breakfast dance! (I'm guessing because, who else could it be?) Great way to get their romance rising to the next level. Hope the fist fight won't last long!
This sentence struck me as odd as I think "orneriness" feels negative:
Orneriness filled his eyes as they met hers. "I heard that."
Maybe: Playfulness flashed in his eyes which met hers
Comment Written 17-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2022
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I like your suggestion. I will think about it. Another reviewer liked that line. HMMM, but I see your point. Thank you for the kind review.