Buddy
An unexpected rescue26 total reviews
Comment from Alaskastory
"Buddy" is an introduction of two people in a clever. The exchange of names behind their masks was special. The ending was surprising, yet sentimental showing an obvious age difference in the new friends. Well done.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2021
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"Buddy" is an introduction of two people in a clever. The exchange of names behind their masks was special. The ending was surprising, yet sentimental showing an obvious age difference in the new friends. Well done.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2021
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Great review zanya
Comment from Susan Larson
Awww, such a sweet story, I was wanting it to be non-fiction. Actually, they say dog parks are the best place to meet the opposite sex (or same, whatever you're seeking ; ) I suppose a love of dogs is a good start. Personally, I'm a cat woman, so it wouldn't work for me.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2021
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Awww, such a sweet story, I was wanting it to be non-fiction. Actually, they say dog parks are the best place to meet the opposite sex (or same, whatever you're seeking ; ) I suppose a love of dogs is a good start. Personally, I'm a cat woman, so it wouldn't work for me.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2021
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Love this review zanya
Comment from equestrik
his is a sweet presentation for the contest with your cute picture combined with your well written story. What a comfort they must be in this time we are in.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2021
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his is a sweet presentation for the contest with your cute picture combined with your well written story. What a comfort they must be in this time we are in.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2021
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Great review zanya
Comment from Begin Again
Seems Harry was sent not only as an angel of mercy, but to become a very important friend. Strange how chance meetings can make changes in our lives forever. Glad it turned out good! Smiles!~
Thanks for joining the contest and I wish you luck!
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2021
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Seems Harry was sent not only as an angel of mercy, but to become a very important friend. Strange how chance meetings can make changes in our lives forever. Glad it turned out good! Smiles!~
Thanks for joining the contest and I wish you luck!
Comment Written 23-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2021
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Great reveiw zanya
Comment from Wendy G
What a lovely story. The safe rescue of the dog, followed by an unexpected and heart-warming friendship, rescuing each other from probable loneliness. Good wishes for the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2021
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What a lovely story. The safe rescue of the dog, followed by an unexpected and heart-warming friendship, rescuing each other from probable loneliness. Good wishes for the contest.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2021
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Great review zanya
Comment from LisaMay
Your story is a well-told transition from an unexpected rescue of the dog's trapped foot, to an unexpected friendship developing.
The only blip I felt was in the first paragraph - where you said "It was quiet at 9 a.m on the forest path", but at the same time Brandy was giving out "blood- curdling yelps".
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2021
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Your story is a well-told transition from an unexpected rescue of the dog's trapped foot, to an unexpected friendship developing.
The only blip I felt was in the first paragraph - where you said "It was quiet at 9 a.m on the forest path", but at the same time Brandy was giving out "blood- curdling yelps".
Comment Written 22-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2021
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Thanks for reviewing & comments -much appreciated zanya
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Fine work for a flash! A stunning beginning to this gripping story with a heartwarming resolution. Sugg: separate the speakers into paragraphs with blank lines between.
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2021
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Fine work for a flash! A stunning beginning to this gripping story with a heartwarming resolution. Sugg: separate the speakers into paragraphs with blank lines between.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2021
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Thanks for reviewing and comments - zanya
Comment from muffinmama
It's amazing how many relationships have been helped along by dogs. They probably have a great track record as matchmakers - LOL
Very heartwarming story.
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2021
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It's amazing how many relationships have been helped along by dogs. They probably have a great track record as matchmakers - LOL
Very heartwarming story.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2021
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Great reveiw zanya
Comment from nor84
Just so you know, the purpose of this review is to be helpful. I will point out any SPAG errors I see and rate according to site guidelines. SPAG means Spelling, Punctuation And Grammar. I may also comment on formatting issues. I will not give a five or six-star review unless I believe the work warrants it.
'Brandy's my buddy for morning walks,' Dorothy blurted out.
'Same here,' the man replied, 'name's Harry.'
'Dorothy, some people insist on Dot, but I'm not one for abbreviations.' THIS SECTION SHOULD HAVE A BLANK LINE BETWEEN SPEAKERS WHEN THE SPEAKER CHANGES.
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2021
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Just so you know, the purpose of this review is to be helpful. I will point out any SPAG errors I see and rate according to site guidelines. SPAG means Spelling, Punctuation And Grammar. I may also comment on formatting issues. I will not give a five or six-star review unless I believe the work warrants it.
'Brandy's my buddy for morning walks,' Dorothy blurted out.
'Same here,' the man replied, 'name's Harry.'
'Dorothy, some people insist on Dot, but I'm not one for abbreviations.' THIS SECTION SHOULD HAVE A BLANK LINE BETWEEN SPEAKERS WHEN THE SPEAKER CHANGES.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2021
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Thanks for taking time to read and offer useful commentary - very much appreciated zanya
Comment from Sugarray77
What an excellent story for this prompt. I love the whole idea and you presented it perfectly... and I am guessing there is a touch of romance in those morning walks. Well done and good luck, my friend.
Melissa
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2021
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What an excellent story for this prompt. I love the whole idea and you presented it perfectly... and I am guessing there is a touch of romance in those morning walks. Well done and good luck, my friend.
Melissa
Comment Written 21-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2021
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Great reveiw zanya