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Friendly Fire

Epitaph contest entry

3 total reviews 
Comment from LisaMay
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I laughed at the humour in your epitaph, then recognised how this situation could actually happen.... when blind allegiance is coupled with stupidity. I think this will be high in the voting.

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2021

reply by the author on 14-Jan-2021
    That's for sure. Haha. There's a lot of that out there.

    Thank you for the great review and stars, Lisa. I'm glad you had a chuckle at this silly piece.
reply by LisaMay on 14-Jan-2021
    Hi Ron :)
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2021
    Sshhhhhh.

    Lol

    ;)
Comment from David Newkirk
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I love limericks and this one is well done. There's also a nice rhythm that you've given it. I don't have any suggestions, just well done - five stars, Good job!

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2021

reply by the author on 13-Jan-2021
    Thank you for the great review and stars, David. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
Comment from mermaids
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You have a smooth flow of rhyming words and a strong steady beat in this epitah. I assume the gentleman was shot by friendly fire. Excellent use of words and a clear scene comes forth.

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2021

reply by the author on 13-Jan-2021
    Yes, that's what it's meaning. Thank you for the great review and stars, Mermaids.