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A Fly on the Wall

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A journal musings and assessments about situations

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Comment from WalkerMan
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Well, it's hard to laugh about irony in those circumstances; but maybe you were lucky in a different way. If that event hastened ending of a marriage which was doomed anyway, then you "won" the better life you have now in the process. Notice who moped -- not you. YOU have what truly matters -- a heart full of love and people to share it with. You can't take money with you when you go, but the love is part of your soul....

Superb -- a Virtual Six, as my real ones are gone.


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 Comment Written 12-Jun-2019


reply by the author on 12-Jun-2019
    WalkerMan, you have the nicest way of reviewing my pieces. You leave me feeling as if I've really connected as a writer. I can't thank you enough for that. xo
reply by WalkerMan on 12-Jun-2019
    Rachelle, you have "connected as a writer" -- I just tell you more directly than others do. You are most welcome. -- Mike
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2019
    You are right about that. Thank you. xo
reply by WalkerMan on 12-Jun-2019
    My father taught me to give credit where it is due. You are again welcome. :))
Comment from Thomas Bowling
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Every Friday, my father wrote down the six numbers he would have played if he bought a ticket, but he never bought one. On Sunday, he would look in the newspaper to see what the winners were. I asked, "why do you do that, so you can commit suicide if your numbers came in?

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 Comment Written 12-Jun-2019


reply by the author on 12-Jun-2019
    Well, don't stop there! What was his reply?? (And did they ever hit?) And do you play the Lottery?