I Walk Alone
Since Carol passed.49 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
These are sad words Willie and I am sorry for your loss, it is hard to carry on without the one you love and it sounds like she always laughed at your jokes and now you have no one to appreciate your humour, a melancholy well written poem, my heart goes out to you, love Dolly x
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These are sad words Willie and I am sorry for your loss, it is hard to carry on without the one you love and it sounds like she always laughed at your jokes and now you have no one to appreciate your humour, a melancholy well written poem, my heart goes out to you, love Dolly x
Comment Written 12-Aug-2022
Comment from Raul1
I see how it affects you that your wonderful lady is no longer with you. My condolences to you and your family. Well written. Excellent work! No mistakes. Thank you for sharing!
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I see how it affects you that your wonderful lady is no longer with you. My condolences to you and your family. Well written. Excellent work! No mistakes. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 12-Aug-2022
Comment from tempeste
Ciao !
When my mother died , pa came to stay with me in our main house in Italy.
We helped each other after the loss and I filled the void mamma left.
I m sure you must feel lonely without your beloved half.
Your poem speaks about your deep and everlasting love for her and all the sweet mmki gestures you shared.
If you believe in God then you know she is looking down on you so whilst you are walking in those woods just talk to her and share your thoughts, feelings.
Have you thought to adopt a dog ?
I think your wife would be happy to see you smile again.
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Ciao !
When my mother died , pa came to stay with me in our main house in Italy.
We helped each other after the loss and I filled the void mamma left.
I m sure you must feel lonely without your beloved half.
Your poem speaks about your deep and everlasting love for her and all the sweet mmki gestures you shared.
If you believe in God then you know she is looking down on you so whilst you are walking in those woods just talk to her and share your thoughts, feelings.
Have you thought to adopt a dog ?
I think your wife would be happy to see you smile again.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2022
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job, Willie with your tribute poem to the times
you and your beloved Carol enjoyed walking in the woods
near your home. Your words were straight from your heart.
The lines flowed smoothly with good rhymes and great imagery.
The image and the cursive font added to the overall presentation.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
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You did a great job, Willie with your tribute poem to the times
you and your beloved Carol enjoyed walking in the woods
near your home. Your words were straight from your heart.
The lines flowed smoothly with good rhymes and great imagery.
The image and the cursive font added to the overall presentation.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
Comment Written 12-Aug-2022
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
This is a beautiful poem remembering your wife and the intimate walks you once shared.
I am sorry for your loss.
Your use of sensory details throughout the verse paint a vivid picture for the reader to experience the walk in the woods.
Your phraseology is excellent adding layers of dimension to your writing.
I appreciate that you shared this special memory with all of us on the site.
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This is a beautiful poem remembering your wife and the intimate walks you once shared.
I am sorry for your loss.
Your use of sensory details throughout the verse paint a vivid picture for the reader to experience the walk in the woods.
Your phraseology is excellent adding layers of dimension to your writing.
I appreciate that you shared this special memory with all of us on the site.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2022
Comment from Terry wrote
I am walking alone also. Your sentiment resonates clearly through the even pace of your lines. Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem. It is written with the sounds of love.
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I am walking alone also. Your sentiment resonates clearly through the even pace of your lines. Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem. It is written with the sounds of love.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2022
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
And the times will never be the same. And time does not heal the pain. I understand how you are feeling. I feel the same way. And no one else would take their place. One day, as myself, we will reunite when God calls our name. Thank you for sharing.
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And the times will never be the same. And time does not heal the pain. I understand how you are feeling. I feel the same way. And no one else would take their place. One day, as myself, we will reunite when God calls our name. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2022
Comment from zanya
NO, it certainly isn't the same when our special partner walks no more with us - I miss my beloved every day- thanks for being so brave to share these very personal sentiments
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NO, it certainly isn't the same when our special partner walks no more with us - I miss my beloved every day- thanks for being so brave to share these very personal sentiments
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Comment Written 12-Aug-2022
Comment from BethShelby
Beautiful Poem. I know exactly how you feel. I had that kind of relationship and and my love who has been gone five years now, and I still walk with him in my dreams. I do believe it isn't forever. We will see them again.
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Beautiful Poem. I know exactly how you feel. I had that kind of relationship and and my love who has been gone five years now, and I still walk with him in my dreams. I do believe it isn't forever. We will see them again.
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Comment Written 12-Aug-2022