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Viewing comments for Chapter 17 "The Rabbit Hole"A collection of stories: Some True, some not
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Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello
I think you write about reincarnation. At least that is what I got out of it.
It's an interesting entry for the sixty word dash. Good word count.
Gypsy ð???
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2020
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Hello
I think you write about reincarnation. At least that is what I got out of it.
It's an interesting entry for the sixty word dash. Good word count.
Gypsy ð???
Comment Written 11-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2020
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Gypsy, thank you! You are a sage one....
Comment from Frank Jauregui
Your poem surely gets the reader thinking with only sixty words. Started out thinking this was about reincarnation, but that wouldn't explain suddenly changing age and gender. Then I thought what kind of rabbit hole did that priest enter?
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
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Your poem surely gets the reader thinking with only sixty words. Started out thinking this was about reincarnation, but that wouldn't explain suddenly changing age and gender. Then I thought what kind of rabbit hole did that priest enter?
Comment Written 11-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
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Oh those pesky rabbit holes we find our minds falling into, some more frightening than others. Smiling back!
Comment from papa55mike
Now that's what I call a plummet down a hole. What a wonderfully written little story and I love the picture.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
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Now that's what I call a plummet down a hole. What a wonderfully written little story and I love the picture.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 11-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
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Oh those pesky rabbit holes we find our minds falling into, some more frightening than others. Smiling back with you Mike!
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Yeah, I'm thinking it was a whole lot more than just a Rabbit Hole, ALICE.... are you sure you've had your coffee today?! ;) :) LOL! ;) A fun fantastical trip for this contest -- thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;)
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
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Yeah, I'm thinking it was a whole lot more than just a Rabbit Hole, ALICE.... are you sure you've had your coffee today?! ;) :) LOL! ;) A fun fantastical trip for this contest -- thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;)
Comment Written 11-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
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Oh Yvette, those pesky rabbit holes we find our minds falling into, some more frightening than others. Smiling back!
Comment from May 1
Wow, that is so beautifully written and fun to read. I love how you can express so much in so few words. All in all, I really enjoyed reading this story.
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reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
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Wow, that is so beautifully written and fun to read. I love how you can express so much in so few words. All in all, I really enjoyed reading this story.
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Comment Written 11-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
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May, Oh those pesky rabbit holes we find our minds falling into, some more frightening than others. Smiling back!