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A Fly on the Wall

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A journal musings and assessments about situations

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Comment from 24chas
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This was a great write, Rachelle. You definitely have a writer's eye in noticing all the details that you noted in this piece. You did well to play it cool and not fly off the handle. Your writings are always a real pleasure to read and I'm always pleased when you release a new one. Great job.

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 Comment Written 16-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
    Oh, 24chas - I see what you did there: Not FLY off the handle. har, har. Funny.

    Thanks very much for this lovely review. I always appreciate what you have to say about my writing. xo
reply by 24chas on 16-Apr-2019
    See, you proved my point. You noticed that seemingly innocuous statement.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
    Hahaha. Got me! Guilty as charged. xo