Perennials of War
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Comment from royowen
Jeremy comes up with an interesting thought, that the NYPD, has been called out to Patricia's (Anderson's wife) on more than one occasion. How interesting! Jeremy tells them Khuznetsov was suspected of being invovolved with the eastern Mafia but they couldn't pin anything on him. Well done Barbara, blessings, Roy
Typo : but was (that) your daughter?
reply by the author on 21-May-2017
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Jeremy comes up with an interesting thought, that the NYPD, has been called out to Patricia's (Anderson's wife) on more than one occasion. How interesting! Jeremy tells them Khuznetsov was suspected of being invovolved with the eastern Mafia but they couldn't pin anything on him. Well done Barbara, blessings, Roy
Typo : but was (that) your daughter?
Comment Written 21-May-2017
reply by the author on 21-May-2017
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Thank you for the catch. I have made the corrections. I appreciate the kind review.
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Most welcome
Comment from pbomar1115
I just read a scene involving an investigation of a painting. The house is alive with dogs, a hungry little girl who loves pancake but will be eating what the maid, Helen, prepares. The writing is excellent.
reply by the author on 21-May-2017
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I just read a scene involving an investigation of a painting. The house is alive with dogs, a hungry little girl who loves pancake but will be eating what the maid, Helen, prepares. The writing is excellent.
Comment Written 21-May-2017
reply by the author on 21-May-2017
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Thank you for the kind review.
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You're welcome.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Ah ha! If Anderson's ex wife has been in trouble, Anderson should easily get custody of Emily, that would please him after what she has threatened him with. I have to dognap Anderson lovely dogs, I would give them such a good home! LOL. I look forward to the next part, Barbara, I think things will be very lively the next time Anderson sees Patricia. Well done again, my friend. :) Sandra xx
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Ah ha! If Anderson's ex wife has been in trouble, Anderson should easily get custody of Emily, that would please him after what she has threatened him with. I have to dognap Anderson lovely dogs, I would give them such a good home! LOL. I look forward to the next part, Barbara, I think things will be very lively the next time Anderson sees Patricia. Well done again, my friend. :) Sandra xx
Comment Written 21-May-2017
reply by the author on 21-May-2017
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I hope Anderson never sees Patricia again. LOL Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Sankey
Great chapter once again. Always a good read and plenty of suspense at all times. Lo0ok forward to more. Loved The Odessa File with John Voigt, (no relation of course) No spags. I am bearing the end of my biography if you care to look back from the end I added some pictures to a couple of the last chapters and I also added content to the second last (inserted split) chapter.
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Great chapter once again. Always a good read and plenty of suspense at all times. Lo0ok forward to more. Loved The Odessa File with John Voigt, (no relation of course) No spags. I am bearing the end of my biography if you care to look back from the end I added some pictures to a couple of the last chapters and I also added content to the second last (inserted split) chapter.
Comment Written 21-May-2017
reply by the author on 21-May-2017
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Thank you for the encouraging review.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This fiction speaks about the human trafficking and mafia world operation about selling of male prostitution in addition of female in countries like Sri Lanka, Thailand, Brazil, Mexico and many other third world countries where starvation is a strong motivator; I liked and enjoyed the social international crime read.
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This fiction speaks about the human trafficking and mafia world operation about selling of male prostitution in addition of female in countries like Sri Lanka, Thailand, Brazil, Mexico and many other third world countries where starvation is a strong motivator; I liked and enjoyed the social international crime read.
Comment Written 21-May-2017
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from prettybluebirds
Excellent. You must have done a good job of editing this post as I can see no errors. The story is interesting and I enjoyed reading it. Poor little Emily with a mother like Patricia to live with. Nicely written. I will watch for more.
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reply by the author on 21-May-2017
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Excellent. You must have done a good job of editing this post as I can see no errors. The story is interesting and I enjoyed reading it. Poor little Emily with a mother like Patricia to live with. Nicely written. I will watch for more.
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Comment Written 21-May-2017
reply by the author on 21-May-2017
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Thank you for the encouraging review.