Comment from
Sankey
Lovely short chapter. I guess the romance is NOT coming yet, as I feel there is a lot more drama and suspense in the mean time. Would he be acceptable as a partner...having been married and a Gentile I am guessing? Just one spag today. "D(id)[o] you wait
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Comment Written 12-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2017
Anderson and Shana have a lot of issues to work out, Jewish and Christian being the biggest. Also if I get them together the story would be over. LOL
reply by Sankey on 12-Mar-2017
Yeah of course that is why I knew nothing doing for some time yet ha. Good work. Have a look at our Missions Conference photos from this weekend. On Facebook of course. We had a great time.
Comment from
Bill Schott
Yehhhh. The scene is getting hot and the cool handed Anderson is getting a little tight in the crotch with little Miss Shana. Cold shower time. Good scene.
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Comment Written 12-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2017
LOL Thank you for the kind review.