Perennials of War
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Comment from royowen
Poor old Shana doesn't know why Anderson is a little Curt, and Jane explains thar.Patricia, Anderson's former wife has visited, they share a daughter Emily. This .a great story Barbara, you do these romance/action/mystery stories really well with and very well conceived and complex plot, well done, Barbara, blessings, Roy
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Poor old Shana doesn't know why Anderson is a little Curt, and Jane explains thar.Patricia, Anderson's former wife has visited, they share a daughter Emily. This .a great story Barbara, you do these romance/action/mystery stories really well with and very well conceived and complex plot, well done, Barbara, blessings, Roy
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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2017
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I appreciate the generous review.
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Welcome
Comment from Ella25
It is a very well written chapter, Barbara. So easy to read and enjoyable. Your writing is astonishing. Feels like we are a part of the story. Excellent. With love, Ella.
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It is a very well written chapter, Barbara. So easy to read and enjoyable. Your writing is astonishing. Feels like we are a part of the story. Excellent. With love, Ella.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2017
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Thank you for the kind review.
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You are welcome, Barbara. With love, Ella
Comment from Sixty70
Well written and an interesting story. A romance and a thriller combined? Looks like it with Russian mafia and missing paintings.
BTW, in the character list, does Shana have more than one family or should that be family's?
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Well written and an interesting story. A romance and a thriller combined? Looks like it with Russian mafia and missing paintings.
BTW, in the character list, does Shana have more than one family or should that be family's?
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2017
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I will check out my character list. I haven't paid much attention to it. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Heidi M
The mystery continues to grow. Poor Shana just wants to be left alone and go home. Doesn't sound like that will happen any time soon!
The Russian mafia guy sounds like someone to avoid.
Check this sentence: 'With a nodded Philip answered the elevator'
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The mystery continues to grow. Poor Shana just wants to be left alone and go home. Doesn't sound like that will happen any time soon!
The Russian mafia guy sounds like someone to avoid.
Check this sentence: 'With a nodded Philip answered the elevator'
Comment Written 29-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2017
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LOL I guess an elevator door can't be answered. LOL I changed it. Thank you.
Comment from mbroyles2
This is such an exceptional story filled with suspense and mystery. What is the Russian mafia's interest in the painting?
Great writing.
One thing:
"With a nodded Phillip answered the door."
With a nod.
Keep it coming.
Michael
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2017
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This is such an exceptional story filled with suspense and mystery. What is the Russian mafia's interest in the painting?
Great writing.
One thing:
"With a nodded Phillip answered the door."
With a nod.
Keep it coming.
Michael
Comment Written 29-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2017
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LOL I guess an elevator door can't be answered. LOL I changed it. Thank you.