Comment from Jasmine Girl

Exceptional

I'm so sorry about your lost of father-in-law. At least you can see your sons and other family members.

I really enjoy reading your novel. I like the humor, too. I haven't had time to read before except for a couple of chapters before. But I will try to keep reading from here.

Excellent.

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2022

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reply by the author on 11-Dec-2022

Thank you for the kind review. Yes, seeing family is always good.

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Exceptional

I'm sorry to learn about your father-in-law's death, it's so much harder when it's near Christmas. My dad and late husband died on the 9th and the 7th of December, it's not my favorite moth. Have a safe journey.
Well, Ali is being well protected now, and I'm glad she's going to speak to her parents, she needs to let them know what she's been going through and what that slime-ball is like. Another fine chapter, Barbara. Well done. :)) Sandra xx

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2022

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reply by the author on 11-Dec-2022

Thank you for the support and the kind review.

Comment from BethShelby

Excellent

I'm sorry about your father-in-law but I guess you knew that was about to happen. Take care and be safe. The story is going well. Ali is pretty banged up but she is getting the help she needs. I have a feeling the abuser will get what is coming to him. I'll look forward to reading your post next Sunday.

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 Comment Written 11-Dec-2022

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reply by the author on 11-Dec-2022

Thank you for the support and kind review.