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Comment from Dawn Munro
First, your notes -- amen. Giving thanks and being grateful is a challenge in trying times, but it is so important to remember that God is good ALL the time. We should offer our praise every day.
Thank you for sharing your faith in this lovely poem. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2022
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First, your notes -- amen. Giving thanks and being grateful is a challenge in trying times, but it is so important to remember that God is good ALL the time. We should offer our praise every day.
Thank you for sharing your faith in this lovely poem. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2022
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Thank you Dawn, for your kind words for my poem. They are so appreciated, my dear friend! In case we don't cross paths in the next few days, Happy Thanksgiving to you and yours! God Bless!
Comment from susand3022
Hello Author,
I liked your Thanksgiving Kyrielle.
I will say that the random capital letters confused me a bit. Words like Holiday, Blessed, Best, and Thanks, although I can understand you wanting to accentuate the word Thanks, it does seem strange to have it capitalized that way, at the end of a line.
The other thing I would suggest is a change in the font which I found a bit hard to read. Could be just me, or the size. I've used the script once before and did think it was a bit challenging. I almost didn't use it.
The poem is really good though, the things I suggested were all simply visual.
Good luck in the contest!
Susan :)
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2022
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Hello Author,
I liked your Thanksgiving Kyrielle.
I will say that the random capital letters confused me a bit. Words like Holiday, Blessed, Best, and Thanks, although I can understand you wanting to accentuate the word Thanks, it does seem strange to have it capitalized that way, at the end of a line.
The other thing I would suggest is a change in the font which I found a bit hard to read. Could be just me, or the size. I've used the script once before and did think it was a bit challenging. I almost didn't use it.
The poem is really good though, the things I suggested were all simply visual.
Good luck in the contest!
Susan :)
Comment Written 19-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2022
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Hi Susan, I read your review and I thank you for lovely comments for my poem, and I always appreciate the feedback. Even though I had received many comments from people who liked and thought that the font was perfect, I don't want my work to be hard for anyone to read. So I was wondering if you could look to see if the font I changed it to reads better. Also I took the caps off blessings, (that's one of those words I always thought should be capitalized because it comes from God) but I know that it isn't supposed to be, but left it on the word thanks because of that being my main theme. Thank you my dear friend for your valuable suggestions and kindness!
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I do like that font better, it's not quite as curlicue as the last one, which makes it easier to read, for me anyway. It does work better that way, I think. It's all up to you though, you're the Author, and it's YOUR poem!
Susan :)
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Susan, I would rather fix something to make it better because there are many with vision problems, including me. Shingles in my eyes a couple years ago left me with much blurr so I can't tell. That's why I appreciate you so very much.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very beautiful and well written Kyrielle poem you have penned about giving thanks. You used very good descriptive words that are so true. There are so many that won't have Thanksgiving, and some don't even have a home. We should all be thankful this day and every day! Thank you for sharing! love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2022
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This is a very beautiful and well written Kyrielle poem you have penned about giving thanks. You used very good descriptive words that are so true. There are so many that won't have Thanksgiving, and some don't even have a home. We should all be thankful this day and every day! Thank you for sharing! love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 19-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2022
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Thank you Teri, for your lovely words for my poem. They are so appreciated, my dear friend! In case we don't cross paths in the next few days, Happy Thanksgiving to you and yours! God Bless!
Teri, I was checking out the club event and was looking through the prompts and your requests for poems for mothers, which I'm sure, made me think of mine. So I didn't write a poem, but I did start a thread and left a comment and something else, especially for you!
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
I love this one well put together. Nicely written kyrielle. Beautiful overall presentation background and font choice. Great photo to compliment your words as well. Good luck in the contest.
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I love this one well put together. Nicely written kyrielle. Beautiful overall presentation background and font choice. Great photo to compliment your words as well. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2022
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Thank you so much Joann for your kind words for my poem and the gracious gift of six stars! They are so appreciated, my dear friend! In case we don't cross paths in the next few days, Happy Thanksgiving to you and yours! God Bless!
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Your welcome 🙂
Comment from Terry Broxson
It is Saturday and out of sixes to give to a deserving poem. I did find many deserving this week. An excellent entry for this contest. Although, I do admit I know nothing about a kyrielle. But the message of this poem is clear and beautifully written. Well done, Mystery Writer, Terry.
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2022
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It is Saturday and out of sixes to give to a deserving poem. I did find many deserving this week. An excellent entry for this contest. Although, I do admit I know nothing about a kyrielle. But the message of this poem is clear and beautifully written. Well done, Mystery Writer, Terry.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2022
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Thank you Terry, for your kind words for my poem. They are so appreciated, my dear friend! In case we don't cross paths in the next few days, Happy Thanksgiving! God Bless!
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Thank you and Mr. G as well.
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Thanks from both of us!
Comment from Tom Horonzy
There is not more to say than Amen, and Ill leave it at that if FanStory allows row upon row of ellipses ... ......................................................................................................................
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2022
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There is not more to say than Amen, and Ill leave it at that if FanStory allows row upon row of ellipses ... ......................................................................................................................
Comment Written 19-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2022
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Thank you Tom for your kind words for my poem. They are so appreciated, my dear friend! In case we don't cross paths in the next few days, Happy Thanksgiving to you and yours! God Bless!
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and back at you, in regard to best wishes.
Comment from zanya
This poem is superb as it encapsulates so effectively the meaning and power of Thanks and the many and varied reasons to be thankful - even the font is beautiful- akin to calligraphy and the autumnal- all in all this poempoemshould make it to the winner's enclosure -has my vote! Wish I had a 6!
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2022
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This poem is superb as it encapsulates so effectively the meaning and power of Thanks and the many and varied reasons to be thankful - even the font is beautiful- akin to calligraphy and the autumnal- all in all this poempoemshould make it to the winner's enclosure -has my vote! Wish I had a 6!
Comment Written 19-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2022
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Zanya, I thank you for your very kind review and comments. You are so sweet and I also thank you for the vote. That truly means a lot to me. So appreciated, my dear friend! In case we don't In case we don't cross paths in the next couple days, Happy Thanksgiving to you and yours!
God Bless!
Comment from Ricky1024
This is a kyrielle Writing Prompt Contest Entry rich in Theme and Imagery.
To give Thanks for your all we have for others have naughty.
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This read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures Aligned Perfectly.
Good luck with your contest Entry.
Doctor Ricky 1024
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reply by the author on 19-Nov-2022
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This is a kyrielle Writing Prompt Contest Entry rich in Theme and Imagery.
To give Thanks for your all we have for others have naughty.
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This read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures Aligned Perfectly.
Good luck with your contest Entry.
Doctor Ricky 1024
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Comment Written 19-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2022
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Ricky, thank you for your very kind review and comments.
That truly means a lot to me. So appreciated, my dear friend!
In case we don't cross paths in the next few days, Happy Thanksgiving to you and yours!
God Bless!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I adore the sentiment, the flow and the clever rhymes with giving being at the centre of the message here in this skilfully written kyrielle, great metre and a pleasure to read, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 19-Nov-2022
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I adore the sentiment, the flow and the clever rhymes with giving being at the centre of the message here in this skilfully written kyrielle, great metre and a pleasure to read, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 19-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2022
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I thank you so very much Dolly. You are so kind and I do appreciate such a lovely review and comments. Thanks again my sweet friend!.