Comment from Paul McFarland

Average

Good attempt at the limerick, but clean up the meter. Meter is very crucial in a limerick. You have me curious. Is Bob someone special in your life?

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 Comment Written 22-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 22-Jul-2021

Yes, he is recently deceased and this is the third chapter in a book to give tribute to him. All of us are not poets. These poems are heartfelt and not meant to be perfect. He is special to the entire FanStory community.

reply by Paul McFarland on 22-Jul-2021

Thanks for reviewing my poem. This is one of my favorites

Comment from justafan

Excellent

Oh my word!! When did this happen? He was indeed a good man and brilliant writer and I will miss him.

This is a lovely tribute to him "A".

Always
Justafan of yours
Missy

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 22-Jul-2021

Thank you, Missy. He died on the 8th of July and buried with full Marine military honors on July 14th.

reply by justafan on 22-Jul-2021

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He was one of the good ones. I remember how he was so generous with his time when I first joined FanStory.
A great loss.

Missy

Comment from Judy Lawless

Excellent

A beautiful poem of memories to honour Bob, amahra. He will certainly be missed by all of us who were blessed with his helpful advice. May he rest in piece.

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 Comment Written 22-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 22-Jul-2021

Thank you, Judy. I meant every word. I adored, Bob. My heart is full.