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Viewing comments for Chapter 17 "The Rabbit Hole"A collection of stories: Some True, some not
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Comment from BethShelby
This is a cute sixty word dash story. That is quite a transformation for a middle aged priest to fall down a rabbit hole and end up a twenty year old nun. That would be shock. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2020
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This is a cute sixty word dash story. That is quite a transformation for a middle aged priest to fall down a rabbit hole and end up a twenty year old nun. That would be shock. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2020
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Beth, this was such fun writing a fantastical tale.
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I'll bet it was fun.
Beth
Comment from Sanku
This priest must have chanted a mantra and spun and spun to reinvent himself as a nun. may be it was his dream or he wanted to be a young woman ! i am not sure of this.
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This priest must have chanted a mantra and spun and spun to reinvent himself as a nun. may be it was his dream or he wanted to be a young woman ! i am not sure of this.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2020
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Beth, this was such fun writing a fantastical tale. Perhaps he was allowing getting in touch with his anima. ( Feminine side )
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
What an excellent flash fiction story! All in 60 words. This has the makings of a short story, or even a novel. It's got enough to really make a super science fiction story. Well done! Good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2020
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What an excellent flash fiction story! All in 60 words. This has the makings of a short story, or even a novel. It's got enough to really make a super science fiction story. Well done! Good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 12-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2020
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Sandra, thank you it was delightful to let my imagination hop onto the page.
Comment from tfawcus
Celibacy certainly does lead to some weird dreams, doesn't it? LOL
The maelstrom of the mind in this case perhaps leading to the poor man's wildest fantasies.
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2020
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Celibacy certainly does lead to some weird dreams, doesn't it? LOL
The maelstrom of the mind in this case perhaps leading to the poor man's wildest fantasies.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2020
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It was a little opening for me to let the imagination hop rampantly. :)
Comment from Natalie Goodwin
This is a good story with a lot of description for only 60 words. The ending was also a bit of a surprise twist to go from being a priest to a nun. Good work.
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2020
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This is a good story with a lot of description for only 60 words. The ending was also a bit of a surprise twist to go from being a priest to a nun. Good work.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2020
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Thank you.
Comment from pome lover
another good one!
Smart, clever people entering this contest.
A very good story - imaginative, humorous, and surprise ending.
very enjoyable.
Good luck in the contest.
pome lover
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2020
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another good one!
Smart, clever people entering this contest.
A very good story - imaginative, humorous, and surprise ending.
very enjoyable.
Good luck in the contest.
pome lover
Comment Written 11-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2020
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Thank you for the good wishes!
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello Mystery Writer!
What a hoot!
Now that was some "rabbit hole" into which you descended!
I must say that I would find the changeover a bit of a shock as well!
Best Wishes!
diane
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2020
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Hello Mystery Writer!
What a hoot!
Now that was some "rabbit hole" into which you descended!
I must say that I would find the changeover a bit of a shock as well!
Best Wishes!
diane
Comment Written 11-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2020
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Diane, Thank you for the good wishes!
Comment from Rikki66
Now that is indeed a rabbit hole, metamorphosis. At twenty is the nun a novice?
This flash dash is well written and conceived. Have a good Tuesday evening.
RikkiLXVI
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2020
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Now that is indeed a rabbit hole, metamorphosis. At twenty is the nun a novice?
This flash dash is well written and conceived. Have a good Tuesday evening.
RikkiLXVI
Comment Written 11-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2020
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Thank you for the good wishes!
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Welcome.
Rikki
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello unknown author
Your entry for the 60 word dash the Rabbit as you
described 'The Rabbit Hole;'
has a bizarre mix of elements, with a twist
Thank you for sharing.
Gert
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2020
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Hello unknown author
Your entry for the 60 word dash the Rabbit as you
described 'The Rabbit Hole;'
has a bizarre mix of elements, with a twist
Thank you for sharing.
Gert
Comment Written 11-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2020
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Gert, thank you, It was fun to let my imagination hop onto the page.
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Well Blind Contest Entry
Here I am hopping to say you are welcome. Gert
Comment from Ogden
Did you mean would I follow If I was the aging priest, the 20-year-old nun, or me? The question is moot, because I'm never anywhere near rabbit holes. Lucky you, though. Enjoy your youth (and remember your vow of chastity)! ;o)
Ogden (Don)
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2020
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Did you mean would I follow If I was the aging priest, the 20-year-old nun, or me? The question is moot, because I'm never anywhere near rabbit holes. Lucky you, though. Enjoy your youth (and remember your vow of chastity)! ;o)
Ogden (Don)
Comment Written 11-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2020
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Don, I would hate to stifle the hormonal sparks, what's an extra set of Hail Mary's LOL