Blended Reality
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Comment from Nowhereman1
Very interesting short. It was well written and easy to follow. You painted a great picture with your words and the message was very clear. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2019
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Very interesting short. It was well written and easy to follow. You painted a great picture with your words and the message was very clear. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 22-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2019
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Thank you!
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A wonderful offering for this contest -- your formatting and presentation is very effective and that final line of "mysterious spark of God's breathing space"....just Wow! Great description!! I've included some catches below... :) Thank you for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
Creator of above --> Creator above
of Gods embrace -->> of God's embrace
Gods put on --> God put on
our Soul; all --> our Soul, all
stories before foretold --> [a bit repetitive or awkward...? perhaps 'stories that were foretold'..]
Souls tale --> Soul's tale
Devils hold --> Devil's hold
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reply by the author on 22-Oct-2019
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A wonderful offering for this contest -- your formatting and presentation is very effective and that final line of "mysterious spark of God's breathing space"....just Wow! Great description!! I've included some catches below... :) Thank you for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
Creator of above --> Creator above
of Gods embrace -->> of God's embrace
Gods put on --> God put on
our Soul; all --> our Soul, all
stories before foretold --> [a bit repetitive or awkward...? perhaps 'stories that were foretold'..]
Souls tale --> Soul's tale
Devils hold --> Devil's hold
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Comment Written 22-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2019
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You are the very best, I never can thank you enough!
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the contest requirements nicely as you deliver a well penned piece on the essence of the soul. The form is well executed as you insert the meditation point at the right moment in each spot (I write this particular style all the time and that placement is critical). Good luck in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
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reply by the author on 22-Oct-2019
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This meets the contest requirements nicely as you deliver a well penned piece on the essence of the soul. The form is well executed as you insert the meditation point at the right moment in each spot (I write this particular style all the time and that placement is critical). Good luck in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
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Comment Written 22-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2019
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You are so very kind in your comments and observation, I appreciate your honest feedback, always.