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A Fly on the Wall

Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "Unquestioning Loyalty"
A journal musings and assessments about situations

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Comment from LisaMay
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Mell now, I have wixed ewotions about this here. I never had grandparents, so I don't have personal experience of that bond, but I do know about Alzheiwers, and sowe of the mords that they utter are cowpletely bizarre, as you have portrayed here so entertainingly.

 Comment Written 12-May-2019


reply by the author on 12-May-2019
    Hahaha. And of all names to change the "w" to an "m"! Poor Owen!

    Thanks for the warvelous review! xo
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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This made me smile and I adore my grandchildren and want to teach them lots of things, I am teaching my 6 year old granddaughter to play chess and she is doing well just now, a fine and amusing write, love Dolly x

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 Comment Written 12-May-2019


reply by the author on 12-May-2019
    Wow, Dolly! That is quite impressive!!! That age, though, are SOO open to learning new things, and they absorb like CRAZY, so you're smart to cultivate that. Were you little when you learned?

    Thanks for this lovely review. xo
reply by Dolly'sPoems on 12-May-2019
    I?m also teaching her to write sonnets but I?m struggling with that one! He he he, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 12-May-2019
    Hahaha. Everything in good time!
Comment from A. Willow Bends
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After having just spent the day with my grandchildren yesterday, this one rang true to my heart. There is a special bond and you have so touched on it eloquently here. I love it1
Wendy

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 Comment Written 12-May-2019


reply by the author on 12-May-2019
    Thank you, Nana! This vote of approval means the world.

    I see you rang in Mother's Day in the BEST possible way. I hope the rest of the time continues as well. xo
reply by A. Willow Bends on 12-May-2019
    Thanks so much!
    Wendy