Perennials of War
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Comment from royowen
You're either of Jewish stock Barbara, or well versed in Jewish kosher food, you have been most thorough in your research/knowledge, I'm impressed. I don't think faith and marriage are separate, although the bible urges to not be unequally yoked, I guess to a non believer in Christ Jew, it would be, (it would be interesting to know Benjamin's and Shana's belief, cat remember if you did, Barbara, well done, blessings, Roy
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You're either of Jewish stock Barbara, or well versed in Jewish kosher food, you have been most thorough in your research/knowledge, I'm impressed. I don't think faith and marriage are separate, although the bible urges to not be unequally yoked, I guess to a non believer in Christ Jew, it would be, (it would be interesting to know Benjamin's and Shana's belief, cat remember if you did, Barbara, well done, blessings, Roy
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Thank you for the kind review. I researched a lot and I have Jewish friends. Some only partially are devote Jews, the others hard core Jewish.
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I have done a lot of research and purchased some books. LOL I have Jewish friends. Some are devote Jews, others not so much. Thank you for the kind review.
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Well done, what do these Jews believe Barbara? In Christ or not?
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Nope, not in Christ. Just God. No Jews believe Jesus is our Savior. They are still waiting for Him to come.
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There are heaps of messianic Jews and ex Islamist who are born again, Christ is at work in His people, what about the original apostles, plus the upper room, there were 120 there, and 3,000 converts on the day of Pentecost, dear Barbara, I'm surprised you don't know that. You can safely insert that in your story, remember He came to His people originally! It was the nation that rejected Him, not individual, Nicdemus and Joseph of Arimethea. Bless you dear girl!
Comment from c_lucas
In America, one can find any type of food they desire. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. There is very good imagery.
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In America, one can find any type of food they desire. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. There is very good imagery.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2019
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Thank you for the kind review.
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You're welcome.
Comment from Tootsie55
A most interesting and informative chapter. You must have worked hard in researching all this. And the punch line at the end...leaving us in expectation once more! One spag."The mixture is stuffed [it] back into the skin and baked."
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A most interesting and informative chapter. You must have worked hard in researching all this. And the punch line at the end...leaving us in expectation once more! One spag."The mixture is stuffed [it] back into the skin and baked."
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I have made that correction. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Barb,
I like this chapter for a number of reasons of how Drew joined in the Jewish Sabbath and to me he is getting a real good way with Shana's daughter (Emily) with helping her to make a right declension not to have a king size bed.
Looks like the Jewish dinner was going well until the explosion.
Gert
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Hello Barb,
I like this chapter for a number of reasons of how Drew joined in the Jewish Sabbath and to me he is getting a real good way with Shana's daughter (Emily) with helping her to make a right declension not to have a king size bed.
Looks like the Jewish dinner was going well until the explosion.
Gert
Comment Written 06-Jan-2019
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It was, the explosion messed everything up. Thank you for the kind review.
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Yes I know, so wondering what takes place next? Gert
Comment from Ulla
Hi Barbara,I liked this chapter and I know I will end up missing this story. I found the following:
"The mixture is stuffed it back into the skin and baked." = drop 'it'
Again I noticed you used 'eyes widening' a couple of times. I'm only mentioning it for your final editing. All the best. Ulla:)))
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Hi Barbara,I liked this chapter and I know I will end up missing this story. I found the following:
"The mixture is stuffed it back into the skin and baked." = drop 'it'
Again I noticed you used 'eyes widening' a couple of times. I'm only mentioning it for your final editing. All the best. Ulla:)))
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Comment Written 06-Jan-2019
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DARN!!! I've tried to edit the 'eyes widening' and still doing it. I will fix the it, and I appreciate the help.
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I know how it is. So easy to fall into a favoured expression. :)))