Perennials of War
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Comment from Ben Colder
I am knee deep in this story. Shanna is something to consider. She is own her way becoming a Texas country girl and nothing wrong with that. Keep it going. Good one Barb. You have done well with your characters
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2018
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I am knee deep in this story. Shanna is something to consider. She is own her way becoming a Texas country girl and nothing wrong with that. Keep it going. Good one Barb. You have done well with your characters
Comment Written 12-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2018
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Thank you for the kind review. Shana is coming into her own.
Comment from kiwijenny
I enjoyed reading this. You have a way to make conversation flow. I haven't read all of the chapters so it is a bit hard to review but I did like this chapter. It seems that Drew likes Shana ..this was my favorite part
Walking over, Anderson rubbed the back of his finger along her jaw line. "No, it isn't. You've reminded me what's important in life
God bless
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reply by the author on 12-Aug-2018
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I enjoyed reading this. You have a way to make conversation flow. I haven't read all of the chapters so it is a bit hard to review but I did like this chapter. It seems that Drew likes Shana ..this was my favorite part
Walking over, Anderson rubbed the back of his finger along her jaw line. "No, it isn't. You've reminded me what's important in life
God bless
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Comment Written 12-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2018
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Thank you for dropping by. I appreciate it.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Barb
It must of been a shocking surprise to Shana to meet Drew's x wife ( Patricia )
I will say from Patricia is talking to Shana she is not very friendly, my question what is her problem?
Gert
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2018
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Hello Barb
It must of been a shocking surprise to Shana to meet Drew's x wife ( Patricia )
I will say from Patricia is talking to Shana she is not very friendly, my question what is her problem?
Gert
Comment Written 12-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2018
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She's a drug addict. It came out earlier but will be revisited. Thank you for the kind review.
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Oh I see now that explains her weird actions
Gert
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
An excellent piece with dialogue telling the story. I like how you worked Shakespeare into it. I'm glad I'm not spending the afternoon with Patricia. Take care, my friend~Debbie
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An excellent piece with dialogue telling the story. I like how you worked Shakespeare into it. I'm glad I'm not spending the afternoon with Patricia. Take care, my friend~Debbie
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Comment Written 12-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2018
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I'm glad you're spending the afternoon with her either, she'd evil. Thank you for the kind review.