Perennials of War
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Comment from Ben Colder
Just like brother trying to hiss something on. LOL. Poor Shanna living an anti Christ life and blinded by religion. Dad hold your peace. Love is at work. Good one Barb.
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Just like brother trying to hiss something on. LOL. Poor Shanna living an anti Christ life and blinded by religion. Dad hold your peace. Love is at work. Good one Barb.
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Thank you for the encouraging review.
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Wow, Drew has some really large houses! Shana was really lucky the day she jumped into his car. She'd be a fool not to marry him. They could do their own things with religion and everythiing else together. :)
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Wow, Drew has some really large houses! Shana was really lucky the day she jumped into his car. She'd be a fool not to marry him. They could do their own things with religion and everythiing else together. :)
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We'll have to wait and see if they can pull it off. LOL Thank you for the kind review. Drew's family are multi billionaires.
Comment from giraffmang
This is a nice interlude in the proceedings. taking in the practicalities of the relocation and some nice humorous touches.
"Drew, its okay. I see your - it's.
I'm guessing you're the conservative Jews." - need opening speech marks here.
Oh my!" Shana covered her mouth - need opening speech marks here.
and has twenty square feet - that's tiny! lol
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This is a nice interlude in the proceedings. taking in the practicalities of the relocation and some nice humorous touches.
"Drew, its okay. I see your - it's.
I'm guessing you're the conservative Jews." - need opening speech marks here.
Oh my!" Shana covered her mouth - need opening speech marks here.
and has twenty square feet - that's tiny! lol
Comment Written 13-May-2018
reply by the author on 13-May-2018
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Thank you, again. I'm still on my PC so I was able to make the corrections. I swear when I edited those quotation marks were there. I am wondering where they went. LOL I honestly do edit, really I do. This post has been written and edited off and on since Christmas break. Oh my!!!
Comment from joycetreasures
Sorry, I'm not familiar with the earlier chapters. But this is an interesting conversation between Michael (Anderson's father) and Shana regarding the Jewish religion. As a matter of fact, I learned something, if true about the types of the Jewish religion and the description of Judaism? Your chapter is written very well. The character Anderson definitely shows a lot of body language as he listens the two above. As a matter of fact, I think, he's embarrassed by his father. This is a nice chapter. Anderson's mother was kind to ask Shana to stay there if she like. I love how you wrote Anderson gave his younger brother that look to be quiet. The flow of the story was smooth with all the different settings going on. Beautiful picture used and the words are beautiful for Mother's Day. Great job! Keep writing. Thanks
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Sorry, I'm not familiar with the earlier chapters. But this is an interesting conversation between Michael (Anderson's father) and Shana regarding the Jewish religion. As a matter of fact, I learned something, if true about the types of the Jewish religion and the description of Judaism? Your chapter is written very well. The character Anderson definitely shows a lot of body language as he listens the two above. As a matter of fact, I think, he's embarrassed by his father. This is a nice chapter. Anderson's mother was kind to ask Shana to stay there if she like. I love how you wrote Anderson gave his younger brother that look to be quiet. The flow of the story was smooth with all the different settings going on. Beautiful picture used and the words are beautiful for Mother's Day. Great job! Keep writing. Thanks
Comment Written 13-May-2018
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Thank you for the encouragement. I appreciate it. Yes, as far as my research what I have added about the Jewish faith is true. I am a mother of four adult sons. I know that look very well.
Comment from royowen
The family discusses whether Anderson, Shana and Emily will move to hid parent's Texas' properties. Wow! I'm amazed at the size of the properties they own, good business Oil wells. Also discuss Shana's Judaism belief's. Beautifully written Barbara, blessings, Roy
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The family discusses whether Anderson, Shana and Emily will move to hid parent's Texas' properties. Wow! I'm amazed at the size of the properties they own, good business Oil wells. Also discuss Shana's Judaism belief's. Beautifully written Barbara, blessings, Roy
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Thank you for the encouraging review.
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Welcome Barbara
Comment from Ulla
Oh Dear, that was funny. You could say Shana stepped into it. She didn't mean to but it just came out that way. Very entertaining indeed. I also liked the part about Judaism. I can see you've done your homework. A very well written chapter, I really enjoyed reading. All the best. Ulla:)))
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Oh Dear, that was funny. You could say Shana stepped into it. She didn't mean to but it just came out that way. Very entertaining indeed. I also liked the part about Judaism. I can see you've done your homework. A very well written chapter, I really enjoyed reading. All the best. Ulla:)))
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Thank you for the encouraging review.
Comment from Mustang Patty
LOL, Barbara;
I can only imagine the suppressed laughter around the table. The little Jewish girl almost invited Drew into her room! I found your description of the Jewish faith spot on with what I've learned over the years. I was blessed to know members of all types of Jews, and I found it fascinating.
Looking forward to more of this story,
~patty~
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LOL, Barbara;
I can only imagine the suppressed laughter around the table. The little Jewish girl almost invited Drew into her room! I found your description of the Jewish faith spot on with what I've learned over the years. I was blessed to know members of all types of Jews, and I found it fascinating.
Looking forward to more of this story,
~patty~
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Comment Written 13-May-2018
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Thank you for the encouraging review.