Perennials of War
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Comment from Sankey
Anotheer great chapter once again. Some excitement and suspense. Glad nothing bad happened just yet. Just one spag this time."Didn't Mommy help you cho(o)se what to watch?"
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reply by the author on 22-Oct-2017
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Anotheer great chapter once again. Some excitement and suspense. Glad nothing bad happened just yet. Just one spag this time."Didn't Mommy help you cho(o)se what to watch?"
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Comment Written 22-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2017
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I will fix that ASAP! Thank you.
Comment from royowen
Is Anderson betraying his feelings for Shana, and the question is...is Emily in danger? Excellent descriptive episode. The mysterious dark car heralds some watchful "nasties" in the vicinity of the playground Barbara, where to from here! Well done, good scribing, blessings, Roy
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reply by the author on 22-Oct-2017
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Is Anderson betraying his feelings for Shana, and the question is...is Emily in danger? Excellent descriptive episode. The mysterious dark car heralds some watchful "nasties" in the vicinity of the playground Barbara, where to from here! Well done, good scribing, blessings, Roy
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Comment Written 22-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2017
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Thank you for the kind review.
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Welcome Barbara