Perennials of War
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Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That was superb, Barbara. You had Shana handle a difficult situation beautifully. The trouble is, many young children do witness scenes they shouldn't and some are treated that way as well. Well done, my friend, I did enjoy this part. Its coming together nicely. Sandra xx
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That was superb, Barbara. You had Shana handle a difficult situation beautifully. The trouble is, many young children do witness scenes they shouldn't and some are treated that way as well. Well done, my friend, I did enjoy this part. Its coming together nicely. Sandra xx
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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2017
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Thank you for the encouraging review.
Comment from Ben Colder
She reminds me of one of my daughters. Never wishing to look cute but fantastic. LOL. Good one Barb. I'm learning a little something in your characterization.
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She reminds me of one of my daughters. Never wishing to look cute but fantastic. LOL. Good one Barb. I'm learning a little something in your characterization.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2017
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Thank you for the compliments. I always appreciate hearing from you.
Comment from royowen
Children only have their mothers, older sisters and, or, an ironman that provides other girls to receive role models, so it's no surprise little Emily is desiring inappropriate clothing, but Shana makes it clear to Anderson that she may need counselling. Well done, a variable that was in the stars, good thinking, another string to Anderson's custody now. Well done Barb, blessings, Roy
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Children only have their mothers, older sisters and, or, an ironman that provides other girls to receive role models, so it's no surprise little Emily is desiring inappropriate clothing, but Shana makes it clear to Anderson that she may need counselling. Well done, a variable that was in the stars, good thinking, another string to Anderson's custody now. Well done Barb, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 08-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2017
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Thank you for the kind review and insight.
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Most welcome
Comment from Sankey
Wow! This looks different. Seems some truths about Andrew's ex and Emily Mother are coming out big time. I am hoping the little girl has not been physically abused her self.
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Wow! This looks different. Seems some truths about Andrew's ex and Emily Mother are coming out big time. I am hoping the little girl has not been physically abused her self.
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Comment Written 08-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2017
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Hmm, I wonder too. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Mustang Patty
A few nits: ' "Shana's talking with her. I think(,) or at least hope(,) this will have a happy ending."'
Hi, Barbara;
A great informative chapter in the storyline. I am really curious about Patricia and her parenting style, along with other things.
'"True, but I'm sure she won't be in favor of Emily looking like a hoochie-momma either.(")
'Then I addressed different types of clothes (that)are appropriate for certain events."' OR 'Then I addressed (the)different types of clothes are appropriate for certain events."'
Looking forward to more,
~patty~
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A few nits: ' "Shana's talking with her. I think(,) or at least hope(,) this will have a happy ending."'
Hi, Barbara;
A great informative chapter in the storyline. I am really curious about Patricia and her parenting style, along with other things.
'"True, but I'm sure she won't be in favor of Emily looking like a hoochie-momma either.(")
'Then I addressed different types of clothes (that)are appropriate for certain events."' OR 'Then I addressed (the)different types of clothes are appropriate for certain events."'
Looking forward to more,
~patty~
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Comment Written 08-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2017
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Thank you for the catches. I always like to get my first few reviews out of the way so I can see my mistakes.