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Is Anderson a gallant knight? Can he recover Shan
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Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That was a fantastic ending, Barbara, the whole story has taken a leap into a more 'active' role. Now the fight begins, this is going to be good, I love a good fight and Anderson is going to deliver! I'm sure the look on the 5 men's faces were a picture when they saw themselves facing three guns pointing right at them. I look forward to the next part! :) Sandra xx
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Comment Written 03-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2017
Thank you for the kind review.
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royowen
Wow! That's audacity for you you, Anderson, Jeff and Philip leave simultaneously from the restaurant, and turn all their weapons on the five men following Them! If that wasn't enough, Anderson had just paid $1,000 for seven tiramisus to his apartment, and the owner knows his address! This is getting to the "pointy" end of the story, Barbara, well done, blessings, Roy
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Comment Written 03-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2017
Thank you for the encouraging words. Dinner was included in that steep bill.
reply by royowen on 03-Sep-2017
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