Perennials of War
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Comment from Ric Myworld
Sounds like an interesting menu that would make this restaurant a rarity in most cities. Caviar may sound appetizing, unless it's referred to as roe or fish eggs. Of course, Beluga or the light-golden Ossetra that comes from wild Sturgeon are top notch for sure, with a price to match. Now the excitement is about to begin, and I can hardly wait. Great job. :-)
I just glad to know that even teachers make my most usual type mistakes. LOL! I don't usually point out the obvious things that I know writers will catch. But this is one of those kinds that we might read right through twenty times without ever noticing it, as I noticed a few paragraphs down you said pitcher rather than picture.
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--"The Beluga Gold, Golden Osetra for an appetizer, and a [picture] (pitcher) of ice water with lemon."
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2017
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Sounds like an interesting menu that would make this restaurant a rarity in most cities. Caviar may sound appetizing, unless it's referred to as roe or fish eggs. Of course, Beluga or the light-golden Ossetra that comes from wild Sturgeon are top notch for sure, with a price to match. Now the excitement is about to begin, and I can hardly wait. Great job. :-)
I just glad to know that even teachers make my most usual type mistakes. LOL! I don't usually point out the obvious things that I know writers will catch. But this is one of those kinds that we might read right through twenty times without ever noticing it, as I noticed a few paragraphs down you said pitcher rather than picture.
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--"The Beluga Gold, Golden Osetra for an appetizer, and a [picture] (pitcher) of ice water with lemon."
Comment Written 27-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2017
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I have made that correction. I can't believe I did i t. I feel like hanging up my computer. LOL Thank you for the kind review.
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I do those things all the time. It amazes me how we can read right through our own mistakes and catch those of others. I enjoy your stories. :-)
Comment from royowen
Phillip, Jeff and Anderson are dining out at Anistasiyah's tea room, and are attended by a waiter with a Eastern European accent. They are being watched by two men, and are joined later by two more A good descriptive episode, Barbara, the story becoming very informative, well done, blessings, Roy
Typo : and a (picture) of ice water with lemon. Pitcher?
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Phillip, Jeff and Anderson are dining out at Anistasiyah's tea room, and are attended by a waiter with a Eastern European accent. They are being watched by two men, and are joined later by two more A good descriptive episode, Barbara, the story becoming very informative, well done, blessings, Roy
Typo : and a (picture) of ice water with lemon. Pitcher?
Comment Written 27-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2017
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I can't believe I made such a stupid error. I just may hang up my computer. LOl Thank you for the catch.
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No, I don't mind catching these mistakes, Lord knows, I make enough myself Barbara. Roy
Comment from Wabigoon
Barbara--
I am reading the "Volk" novels by...Brent Ghelfi, I think it is, about a Russian agent, carries a sig. This reminds me bit of him -- though I don't think you're trying to do the same thing. Last Volk novel I read was about missing art -- a bit hard to "buy," not the art but the plot. I have sampled your work before and will again. This is intriguing and the setting well drawn.
Thanks
Wabigoon/Jeff
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Barbara--
I am reading the "Volk" novels by...Brent Ghelfi, I think it is, about a Russian agent, carries a sig. This reminds me bit of him -- though I don't think you're trying to do the same thing. Last Volk novel I read was about missing art -- a bit hard to "buy," not the art but the plot. I have sampled your work before and will again. This is intriguing and the setting well drawn.
Thanks
Wabigoon/Jeff
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Comment Written 27-Aug-2017
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I have no idea who Brent Ghelfi is. Maybe I need to check him out. Thank you for the kind review.
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Volk is a real rough and tumble Russian agent, porn entrepreneur, graduate of Chechnya. Ghelfi's writing, knowledge is sometimes impressive, sometimes not. I figure the more I know about Russia at the moment the better. Ghelfi not like what I know of your writing at all.
Comment from Sankey
Good reading, once again. Keep up the good work. Trying to get 2 final chapters of my biography regarding the last 3 months or so of my wife in Hospital and after completed. Now a couple of spags. and a picture of ice water with lemon."...I guess the "picture" in the current setting is appropriate...but I think you meant "pitcher" I see you got this corrected down further, hehe.
two men watching [line jump]
Anderson, Philip, and Jeff.
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Good reading, once again. Keep up the good work. Trying to get 2 final chapters of my biography regarding the last 3 months or so of my wife in Hospital and after completed. Now a couple of spags. and a picture of ice water with lemon."...I guess the "picture" in the current setting is appropriate...but I think you meant "pitcher" I see you got this corrected down further, hehe.
two men watching [line jump]
Anderson, Philip, and Jeff.
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Comment Written 27-Aug-2017
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I have made that correction and will take care of the line jump, but I think the computer won't allow me to correct it. Thank you for the kind review.
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Computers are a pain!