Perennials of War
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Comment from Curly Girly
This is a well-written chapter, Barbara.
Shana is upset and Phillip is trying to understand why, so he dares to ask this question:
Your father didn't seem to be overly interested in getting this painting back. Why is it so important to you?"
I am left wondering if she will tell him or not.
We'll find out, I hope, in the next section.
Nicole
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2017
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This is a well-written chapter, Barbara.
Shana is upset and Phillip is trying to understand why, so he dares to ask this question:
Your father didn't seem to be overly interested in getting this painting back. Why is it so important to you?"
I am left wondering if she will tell him or not.
We'll find out, I hope, in the next section.
Nicole
Comment Written 02-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2017
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Yes, we will find out. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from c_lucas
Evil will rule the day
If it can get its on way
Innocence are but few
Poor Shana doesn't know what to do.
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This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2017
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Evil will rule the day
If it can get its on way
Innocence are but few
Poor Shana doesn't know what to do.
***
This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read.
Comment Written 02-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2017
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Thank you for the sweet poem. I appreciate you're kind review.
Comment from Ric Myworld
It's my guess, that Benjamin, her father, doesn't have any idea of exactly how much the painting is worth, either. But once he does, he won't be so nonchalant about it. Thanks for sharing. :-)
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2017
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It's my guess, that Benjamin, her father, doesn't have any idea of exactly how much the painting is worth, either. But once he does, he won't be so nonchalant about it. Thanks for sharing. :-)
Comment Written 02-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2017
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We shall see. LOL Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from rheabug
This was a good read. I enjoyed it and I must read more of this story. Seems like you keep on with you excellent writing. I commend you on a job well done. Hugs...Linda
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2017
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This was a good read. I enjoyed it and I must read more of this story. Seems like you keep on with you excellent writing. I commend you on a job well done. Hugs...Linda
Comment Written 02-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2017
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from apky
"I image they would voice their concerns(add ,) not physically attack. These people are trying to...," Shana used a tissue to dab her eyes, "wage war on me and it's over a painting."
Philip leaned forward in his chair and his eyes met Shana's. "I know I'm sticking my nose in your personal business, but I'm curious. Your father didn't seem to be overly interested in getting this painting back. Why is it so important to you?"
~ Yes, I can't wait to hear the answer to Philip's question - I'd wondered about that.
This chapter was wonderfully full of action and suspense.
Well done.
Apky
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2017
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"I image they would voice their concerns(add ,) not physically attack. These people are trying to...," Shana used a tissue to dab her eyes, "wage war on me and it's over a painting."
Philip leaned forward in his chair and his eyes met Shana's. "I know I'm sticking my nose in your personal business, but I'm curious. Your father didn't seem to be overly interested in getting this painting back. Why is it so important to you?"
~ Yes, I can't wait to hear the answer to Philip's question - I'd wondered about that.
This chapter was wonderfully full of action and suspense.
Well done.
Apky
Comment Written 02-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2017
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Thank you. I am off to make that correction. I appreciate the help.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Barb,
My goodness looks like there is a big reason why Shana's father interest getting the painting back
Good writing about the helicopter making its landing.
Gert
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2017
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Hello Barb,
My goodness looks like there is a big reason why Shana's father interest getting the painting back
Good writing about the helicopter making its landing.
Gert
Comment Written 02-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2017
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Thank you for the encouraging review.
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You are welcome Barb
Gert
Comment from Sankey
Wow! Getting very dramatic, now. You do have a real knack for suspense and thrill. Short, probably a joining chapter I am guessing. Keep up the good work. Great reading as usual and no spags.
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2017
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Wow! Getting very dramatic, now. You do have a real knack for suspense and thrill. Short, probably a joining chapter I am guessing. Keep up the good work. Great reading as usual and no spags.
Comment Written 02-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2017
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Thank you for the encouraging review.
Comment from royowen
Philip poses and interesting question to Shana, "why do you want to get your family's painting back, your family doesn't seem anxiou?" The proposed helicopter flying close to Drew's place, has somebody watching with binoculars, but the police helicopter rocks up, disturbing it, it's getting exciting Barbara, well done, good scribing, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2017
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Philip poses and interesting question to Shana, "why do you want to get your family's painting back, your family doesn't seem anxiou?" The proposed helicopter flying close to Drew's place, has somebody watching with binoculars, but the police helicopter rocks up, disturbing it, it's getting exciting Barbara, well done, good scribing, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 02-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2017
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I appreciate the kind review.
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Most welcome
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi, Barb
= Goodness, from boring to spying
= That would take some getting used to.
= Well written chapter.
= Change let to led
"You're coming with me." Jane let(led) the child away.
<> A Smile Is Just A Smile Away <> (*>*)
Cheers -- Jax
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reply by the author on 02-Jul-2017
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Hi, Barb
= Goodness, from boring to spying
= That would take some getting used to.
= Well written chapter.
= Change let to led
"You're coming with me." Jane let(led) the child away.
<> A Smile Is Just A Smile Away <> (*>*)
Cheers -- Jax
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 02-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2017
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Thank you for the catch. I am going to fix it now.
Comment from Ben Colder
made me get up and raid the cookie jar. I can see the choppers and the wind blowing everything near. Yep, so they can see. Now what?
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2017
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made me get up and raid the cookie jar. I can see the choppers and the wind blowing everything near. Yep, so they can see. Now what?
Comment Written 02-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2017
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Very good question? Now what? LOL Thank you for the kind review.
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Just picking at you. All of your stories have that certain twist. I look for the dogs and I look for short twist of mystery that normally leaves cliff hangers. Well done.