Perennials of War
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Comment from judiverse
Another fine chapter. Great setting as the city wakes up. Shana just may come to love this lifestyle! The dogs really steal the show. Romeo has definitely made himself Shana's dog. Shana isn't sure about her situation. If she gives up the painting, will that get the Russians off her case? Anderson isn't sure that she and her family will be safe even if she gives up. Suspenseful ending to this post, as we wonder what new information Jeff has and what bearing it will have on Shana's decision. judi
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2017
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Another fine chapter. Great setting as the city wakes up. Shana just may come to love this lifestyle! The dogs really steal the show. Romeo has definitely made himself Shana's dog. Shana isn't sure about her situation. If she gives up the painting, will that get the Russians off her case? Anderson isn't sure that she and her family will be safe even if she gives up. Suspenseful ending to this post, as we wonder what new information Jeff has and what bearing it will have on Shana's decision. judi
Comment Written 17-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2017
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Thank you for the generous review.
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Hello my friend this is well written I enjoyed it is moving along nicely just at the right pace so it doesn't get too complicated perhaps Anderson will get some answers now so Shauna will no what is to be done next and how to move forward I enjoyed regards Jill
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Hello my friend this is well written I enjoyed it is moving along nicely just at the right pace so it doesn't get too complicated perhaps Anderson will get some answers now so Shauna will no what is to be done next and how to move forward I enjoyed regards Jill
Comment Written 17-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2017
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from rtobaygo
Good morning, Barbara
Enjoyed the informal banter between your characters and the way you include the dog as an integral part of Shana's life. waiting for the Russian's to try and claim the picture.
One observation:
the edge she could watch this (magnificent city wake up and sat...had to pause here...didn't understand wake up and sat?).
Take care and stay safe,
Ray
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2017
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Good morning, Barbara
Enjoyed the informal banter between your characters and the way you include the dog as an integral part of Shana's life. waiting for the Russian's to try and claim the picture.
One observation:
the edge she could watch this (magnificent city wake up and sat...had to pause here...didn't understand wake up and sat?).
Take care and stay safe,
Ray
Comment Written 17-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2017
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Thank you for the catch. I make the correction.
Comment from giraffmang
Hi Barbara,
Another good instalment. I liked the humorous part with Anderson answering for the dog. lol
and then we can decided if continuing - decide.
"Drew, its Jeff. Something has come - it's Jeff.
All the best
G
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2017
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Hi Barbara,
Another good instalment. I liked the humorous part with Anderson answering for the dog. lol
and then we can decided if continuing - decide.
"Drew, its Jeff. Something has come - it's Jeff.
All the best
G
Comment Written 17-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2017
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I made the correction. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from mbroyles2
Excellent chapter that sets a scene up for further answers as Shana tries to decide what to do.
Drew seems anxious to gelp.
Exceptional characters draws us into the story and care about what is happening.
Michael
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2017
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Excellent chapter that sets a scene up for further answers as Shana tries to decide what to do.
Drew seems anxious to gelp.
Exceptional characters draws us into the story and care about what is happening.
Michael
Comment Written 17-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2017
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Thank you for the generous review.
Comment from Jay Squires
Easily your best novel to date, Barbara. At least as far as I'm concerned. I think it's the result of the accumulation of words strung together over time. You've gotten so much more graphic in your characterization and your plots have taken on greater sophistication.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2017
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Easily your best novel to date, Barbara. At least as far as I'm concerned. I think it's the result of the accumulation of words strung together over time. You've gotten so much more graphic in your characterization and your plots have taken on greater sophistication.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2017
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Thank you for the generous review.
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Hmmm.... then we can decided if continuing to get the painting back is worth it or not
Is putting lives in danger worth having an old painting? I'd say no, but everyone has their own priorities. I wonder just what the dangers will be. Surely nothing is too daring for Drew. I think he likes playing the hero. :)
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2017
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Hmmm.... then we can decided if continuing to get the painting back is worth it or not
Is putting lives in danger worth having an old painting? I'd say no, but everyone has their own priorities. I wonder just what the dangers will be. Surely nothing is too daring for Drew. I think he likes playing the hero. :)
Comment Written 17-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2017
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Sankey
Good work, again, Barbara. No spags and still got us all in suspense. I love the dogs how they interact with everyone. I made a mistake other day and left my chapter closed to public view. I have fixed that now.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2017
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Good work, again, Barbara. No spags and still got us all in suspense. I love the dogs how they interact with everyone. I made a mistake other day and left my chapter closed to public view. I have fixed that now.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2017
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from MelB
Hi Barb, I enjoy Shana talking to the dog, and now, she was actually talking to Anderson. Very nice dialogue. Maybe, we will find out if she will pursue the painting or not.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2017
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Hi Barb, I enjoy Shana talking to the dog, and now, she was actually talking to Anderson. Very nice dialogue. Maybe, we will find out if she will pursue the painting or not.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2017
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Thank you for the kind review.
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You're most welcome:)
Comment from frierajac
Sorry, toward the end you've got. "and then we can decided if continuing..." etc.
with a tense shift. I haven't read the beginning chapters. Although I may do so
now. I like the writing stile and the dialogue formation.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2017
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Sorry, toward the end you've got. "and then we can decided if continuing..." etc.
with a tense shift. I haven't read the beginning chapters. Although I may do so
now. I like the writing stile and the dialogue formation.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2017
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I have made that correction. Thank you for the kind review.