Perennials of War
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Comment from judiverse
I know, I know. People talk to their dogs all the time. I talk to my kittens. The trouble comes when we expect them to give us advice. I enjoyed that Shana is talking to Romeo. He has taken quite a shine to her and is very protective. When you see something like that in a story, you expect something to come of it later. Maybe he'll actually have occasion to protect Shana. Anderson seems puzzled about how to keep the Russians from harming Shana or someone in her family. Great work with this. judi
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2017
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I know, I know. People talk to their dogs all the time. I talk to my kittens. The trouble comes when we expect them to give us advice. I enjoyed that Shana is talking to Romeo. He has taken quite a shine to her and is very protective. When you see something like that in a story, you expect something to come of it later. Maybe he'll actually have occasion to protect Shana. Anderson seems puzzled about how to keep the Russians from harming Shana or someone in her family. Great work with this. judi
Comment Written 09-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2017
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Thank you for the encouragement. I speak to my pets all the time.
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Your welcome. Your coments to your pets are all complementary, I'm sure. judi
Comment from Sankey
I loved this. I bet you used to talk to your dogs a lot, ha!....Loved the family map of the "Noahic"?? line. I have seen that some place before. I also liked the scripture from the Torah which is obviously also the five books of the law from Moses..Pentateuch also preservice in KJV etc.Was reminded in the beginning(Intro) of a story from a preacher years ago in talking to one of the women from his congregation. She was bemoaning how she had to do this and that and so on...so he said "Well so and so can do this and so and so can do that......"..she responded..." I didn't want help I just wanted sympathy!" HE!HE!
Now just one change, maybe.
Romeo growl and her comment..."I take that [i](a)s a 'You shouldn't leave.'
More chapters up including a new added one about my Political aspirations no rewards sorry.
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2017
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I loved this. I bet you used to talk to your dogs a lot, ha!....Loved the family map of the "Noahic"?? line. I have seen that some place before. I also liked the scripture from the Torah which is obviously also the five books of the law from Moses..Pentateuch also preservice in KJV etc.Was reminded in the beginning(Intro) of a story from a preacher years ago in talking to one of the women from his congregation. She was bemoaning how she had to do this and that and so on...so he said "Well so and so can do this and so and so can do that......"..she responded..." I didn't want help I just wanted sympathy!" HE!HE!
Now just one change, maybe.
Romeo growl and her comment..."I take that [i](a)s a 'You shouldn't leave.'
More chapters up including a new added one about my Political aspirations no rewards sorry.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2017
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I will skip over to read it in a few minutes. I appreciate your catch. I made the correction. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Smiles, Barb for telling us what Shana read from the Torah and making it more interesting with Romeo (the dog) Sounds like he is a good listener?
Gert
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Smiles, Barb for telling us what Shana read from the Torah and making it more interesting with Romeo (the dog) Sounds like he is a good listener?
Gert
Comment Written 09-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2017
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I know my dogs are always the best listeners. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That was a nice chat with Romeo, I have always found I get more sense out of talking to animals than I do people, lol! Well, I just hope she listens to the gentle growls and stays with Anderson. Another lovely part to this chapter, Barbara. I look forward to finding out what she decides to do. :) Sandra xx
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That was a nice chat with Romeo, I have always found I get more sense out of talking to animals than I do people, lol! Well, I just hope she listens to the gentle growls and stays with Anderson. Another lovely part to this chapter, Barbara. I look forward to finding out what she decides to do. :) Sandra xx
Comment Written 09-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2017
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Heidi M
Really sweet how Shana can talk to Romeo and he just listens. You do a good job of showing how alone she feels and how uncertain she is about her situation with the painting.
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2017
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Really sweet how Shana can talk to Romeo and he just listens. You do a good job of showing how alone she feels and how uncertain she is about her situation with the painting.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2017
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Thank you for the kind words. That's what I hoping to portray. I was worried people would see this post as nothing.
Comment from Nikki-Nicole
This is an interesting read.
The dialogue is great and keeps the reader reading.
This chapter is well-written.
Nicely polished.
Free of grammatical errors!
The image is good.
The author's notes are greatly appreciated.- Thank you!
Thanks for sharing a part of your book.
Good luck with your future writing!
-Nicole-
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2017
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This is an interesting read.
The dialogue is great and keeps the reader reading.
This chapter is well-written.
Nicely polished.
Free of grammatical errors!
The image is good.
The author's notes are greatly appreciated.- Thank you!
Thanks for sharing a part of your book.
Good luck with your future writing!
-Nicole-
Comment Written 09-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2017
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Thank you for the generous review.
Comment from Ulla
Hi Barbara, well I guess a dog is as good a listener as anybody. At least you don't get an argument from them. So she's staying on, and that's good.
Shana sat beside the large German shepherd and he place his head ... = and he placed his head.
She's troubled. Looking forward to reading on. All the best, Ulla:)))
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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2017
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Hi Barbara, well I guess a dog is as good a listener as anybody. At least you don't get an argument from them. So she's staying on, and that's good.
Shana sat beside the large German shepherd and he place his head ... = and he placed his head.
She's troubled. Looking forward to reading on. All the best, Ulla:)))
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Comment Written 09-Apr-2017
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Thank you for the catch. I am off to make the correction. I appreciate the help.
Comment from royowen
If one needs sheer therapy, talk to a dog, they are brilliant listeners, and quite often one can get an answer, not so much from the dog, (well, maybe!) but one can figure it out. Shana goes to the Torah, Ham was cursed, hence Canaan, because he disrespected his father. I'm sure she'll work it out! Great episode Barbara, well done, blessings, Roy
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If one needs sheer therapy, talk to a dog, they are brilliant listeners, and quite often one can get an answer, not so much from the dog, (well, maybe!) but one can figure it out. Shana goes to the Torah, Ham was cursed, hence Canaan, because he disrespected his father. I'm sure she'll work it out! Great episode Barbara, well done, blessings, Roy
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Comment Written 09-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2017
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Thank you for the generous review.
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Most welcome