Perennials of War
Viewing comments for Chapter 21 "Chapter Sieben part eine"Is Anderson a gallant knight? Can he recover Shan
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Comment from c_lucas
It looks as if things are beginning to heat up. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. There is very good imagery.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2017
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It looks as if things are beginning to heat up. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. There is very good imagery.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2017
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Thank you for the kind review
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You are welcome, Barbara
Comment from Ben Colder
German, I can speak. Low and high. Are you going that direction? Hebrew, I do not or Spanish but would love too. Story still flowing. Russian M. Tough bunch. Very clever. Keep it rolling.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2017
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German, I can speak. Low and high. Are you going that direction? Hebrew, I do not or Spanish but would love too. Story still flowing. Russian M. Tough bunch. Very clever. Keep it rolling.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2017
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My characters haven't told me the total direction they are going yet. I wish they would. LOL Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from ciliverde
It's too much trouble for a painting, but it's a family heirloom, so...? I guess Shana is thinking that it's not worth risking their lives to get the painting back, which makes perfect sense...and yet...Anderson seems up to the challenge.
Another great chapter, you are building the suspense well,
Carol
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2017
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It's too much trouble for a painting, but it's a family heirloom, so...? I guess Shana is thinking that it's not worth risking their lives to get the painting back, which makes perfect sense...and yet...Anderson seems up to the challenge.
Another great chapter, you are building the suspense well,
Carol
Comment Written 26-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2017
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The painting was stolen from Shana's family by the Nazis during WWII. She was innocently trying to get it back when all of this happened. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from light
I think Shana feels like she is being left out of a plan that pertains to her safety. The group is just trying to protect Shana, but she feels that it is too dangerous. Another great chapter.
Elaine
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2017
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I think Shana feels like she is being left out of a plan that pertains to her safety. The group is just trying to protect Shana, but she feels that it is too dangerous. Another great chapter.
Elaine
Comment Written 26-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2017
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Ric Myworld
I would be willing to bet that the picture has much greater value than just for it's aesthetic purposes. And I believe that it won't be long before we start finding out just how much. Great job. :-)
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2017
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I would be willing to bet that the picture has much greater value than just for it's aesthetic purposes. And I believe that it won't be long before we start finding out just how much. Great job. :-)
Comment Written 26-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2017
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I sure hope so myself. LOL Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from judiverse
Anderson and others in the household are so protective of Shana. They seem to be trying to spare her details of their plan to use Jeremy to try to get information about what the Russian Mafia's interesting in the painting might be. Shana doesn't want anyone to be put in harm's way on her account, which is admirable. However, Anderson is the only one with the resources to be of help. I agree with Shana that she should be informed about what's going on. I love this story and the characters. judi
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2017
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Anderson and others in the household are so protective of Shana. They seem to be trying to spare her details of their plan to use Jeremy to try to get information about what the Russian Mafia's interesting in the painting might be. Shana doesn't want anyone to be put in harm's way on her account, which is admirable. However, Anderson is the only one with the resources to be of help. I agree with Shana that she should be informed about what's going on. I love this story and the characters. judi
Comment Written 26-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2017
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Thank you for the encouragement.
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You're welcome. I am always eager to read another chapter! judi
Comment from Sis Cat
Yes, Shana: "This is way too much trouble for a painting." The investigation of the painting reemerges as the central theme in this chapter as Jane's second-cousin twice removed Jeremy emerges as a possibility to do undercover work inside the Russian mafia to solve the mystery. I agree with Anderson: "If we're not careful we could all be in serious danger. That's why I wanted time to consider our options." In hopes of maintaining and growing her connection with Anderson as people decide what to do next, Shana's eyes met Anderson's. "I hope this 'we' includes me."
I found only two SPAGS: "He's an un(der)cover cop for the NY(PD)." If he was an uncover cop, he'd be nude which might not be bad. : )
Thank you for sharing another thrilling chapter.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2017
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Yes, Shana: "This is way too much trouble for a painting." The investigation of the painting reemerges as the central theme in this chapter as Jane's second-cousin twice removed Jeremy emerges as a possibility to do undercover work inside the Russian mafia to solve the mystery. I agree with Anderson: "If we're not careful we could all be in serious danger. That's why I wanted time to consider our options." In hopes of maintaining and growing her connection with Anderson as people decide what to do next, Shana's eyes met Anderson's. "I hope this 'we' includes me."
I found only two SPAGS: "He's an un(der)cover cop for the NY(PD)." If he was an uncover cop, he'd be nude which might not be bad. : )
Thank you for sharing another thrilling chapter.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2017
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Thank you for the catches. I guess I have an X-rated undercover cop in my story. OH MY!!!!
Comment from royowen
The group continue to plot their strategies and weigh them up as they travel on their verbal journey, of course Shana doesn't want anyone to be hurt, but Anderson assures her, that this won't happen...yeah right. Well done, Barbara, blessings, Roy
Typo I have a feeling Marvov isn't (interesting) interested?
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2017
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The group continue to plot their strategies and weigh them up as they travel on their verbal journey, of course Shana doesn't want anyone to be hurt, but Anderson assures her, that this won't happen...yeah right. Well done, Barbara, blessings, Roy
Typo I have a feeling Marvov isn't (interesting) interested?
Comment Written 26-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2017
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Thank you for the kind review.I am off to fix it.
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Well done
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Barb
If you want me to make any suggestion to better this already very good chapter, you are asking the wrong person.
I like reading of how you are bringing up the tension ---why this painting is so important to Morzov
Gert
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2017
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Hello Barb
If you want me to make any suggestion to better this already very good chapter, you are asking the wrong person.
I like reading of how you are bringing up the tension ---why this painting is so important to Morzov
Gert
Comment Written 26-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2017
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from His Grayness
I measure my stars on "GRIP" and this author has definitely "gripped...Grip". Of course, my definition of "GRIP" is the strength of capture that the writing delivers upon the reader as this is what allows the work to continue to flow into and embrace the reader's mind. This writing demonstrates that very well indeed! I cannot suggest anything to improve this work and certainly thank the author for introducing this fine work! HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2017
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I measure my stars on "GRIP" and this author has definitely "gripped...Grip". Of course, my definition of "GRIP" is the strength of capture that the writing delivers upon the reader as this is what allows the work to continue to flow into and embrace the reader's mind. This writing demonstrates that very well indeed! I cannot suggest anything to improve this work and certainly thank the author for introducing this fine work! HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
Comment Written 26-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2017
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Thank you for the generous and encouraging review. You made my day.
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Yaaay! I just love to make someone's day...Now we're even cause you made mine already! Blessings: Vance