Perennials of War
Viewing comments for Chapter 20 "Chapter Sechs part vier"Is Anderson a gallant knight? Can he recover Shan
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Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Hello my friend this is well written oh dear has Jane put her foot in it mentioning Jeremy Shauna doesn't seem happy that things are moving forward without her being told I enjoyed you have done well again cant wait for next installment regards Jill
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2017
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Hello my friend this is well written oh dear has Jane put her foot in it mentioning Jeremy Shauna doesn't seem happy that things are moving forward without her being told I enjoyed you have done well again cant wait for next installment regards Jill
Comment Written 19-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2017
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Heidi M
I especially liked when Shana pretended to cover Romeo's ears to whisper cat to Anderson. I also liked the mention of her attraction to brown eyes and that Anderson's eye color conveniently happens to be brown.
Nice job writing this section.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2017
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I especially liked when Shana pretended to cover Romeo's ears to whisper cat to Anderson. I also liked the mention of her attraction to brown eyes and that Anderson's eye color conveniently happens to be brown.
Nice job writing this section.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2017
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from judiverse
It doesn't seem yet that Shana has tumbled to the fact that Anderson is becoming very interested in her. Great setting the big city at night atmosphere. What dog doesn't want to be included in everything? Romeo has taken quite a liking to Shana, and he must consider himself her protector. Shana isn't in yet on all the details of the plan to use Jeremy to try to get to the bottom of what's behind the Russians and their persistent efforts to find a mysterious something or other in a painting. Great story, and it gets a six. I can't wait to read your latest posts. judi
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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It doesn't seem yet that Shana has tumbled to the fact that Anderson is becoming very interested in her. Great setting the big city at night atmosphere. What dog doesn't want to be included in everything? Romeo has taken quite a liking to Shana, and he must consider himself her protector. Shana isn't in yet on all the details of the plan to use Jeremy to try to get to the bottom of what's behind the Russians and their persistent efforts to find a mysterious something or other in a painting. Great story, and it gets a six. I can't wait to read your latest posts. judi
Comment Written 19-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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Thank you for your generous review.
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You're very welcome, Barbara. Great story. judi
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Aww, Barbara, I'm loving this gentle romance, and the added drama of the paintings. What is it about the paintings that so many people are trying to get Shana? Such a lot of unanswered questions Anderson will have to find answers for. Excellent as always, my friend. :) Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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Aww, Barbara, I'm loving this gentle romance, and the added drama of the paintings. What is it about the paintings that so many people are trying to get Shana? Such a lot of unanswered questions Anderson will have to find answers for. Excellent as always, my friend. :) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 19-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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Thank you for your generous review.
Comment from royowen
I love the fact the dogs are always included in the family. All our dogs were family members, and when they sensed something was happening, they'd look expectant, and seemed to say "What are we doing now huh?" Well done, some romance blooming between Anderson and Shana? They've checked out Jeremy, and decided he's OK, great scribing Barbara, well done, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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I love the fact the dogs are always included in the family. All our dogs were family members, and when they sensed something was happening, they'd look expectant, and seemed to say "What are we doing now huh?" Well done, some romance blooming between Anderson and Shana? They've checked out Jeremy, and decided he's OK, great scribing Barbara, well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 19-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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Thank you for your generous review.
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Most welcome
Comment from Sankey
Good chapter again. Sensing romance in the air but as we discussed before the racial differences preclude some of it perhaps. Love the dogs. No spags and a great read as usual. I have one of my chapters of my biography up again for reviewing since I edited it some more.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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Good chapter again. Sensing romance in the air but as we discussed before the racial differences preclude some of it perhaps. Love the dogs. No spags and a great read as usual. I have one of my chapters of my biography up again for reviewing since I edited it some more.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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Thank you for the kind review
Comment from country ranch writer
Maybe she will find something out about the painting. So much she don't know about and hope she can figure it out without causing too much trouble between everyone
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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Maybe she will find something out about the painting. So much she don't know about and hope she can figure it out without causing too much trouble between everyone
Comment Written 19-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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I hope she can too. Thank you for the generous review.
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Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Barb,
Soon as I saw this chapter about a budding romance between Anderson and Shana it was a must for me to read.
I will say you have an unique way to draw us in with slow sweet pace about the romance along with its drama finding
Shana's family's stolen relics.
Gert
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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Hello Barb,
Soon as I saw this chapter about a budding romance between Anderson and Shana it was a must for me to read.
I will say you have an unique way to draw us in with slow sweet pace about the romance along with its drama finding
Shana's family's stolen relics.
Gert
Comment Written 19-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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Thank you for the kind review. I figure if I get them together too soon, the romance is over. LOL
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Hi Barb
I will say you did take your time and you are building this budding romaine( I hope with speed)
Gert
Comment from Sasha
I can feel the spark Anderson feels for Shana. I almost forgot about the cousin. I wonder if he can help them with what they need. He needs to keep Sana updated on what is going on. Great dialogue in this one. I do hope Anderson is able to retrieve Shana's family painting, but I fear it is not going to be an easy job. I look forward to the next post. I didn't find anything that needs fixing or changing, of course, you know me, I am the worst editor on this sight.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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I can feel the spark Anderson feels for Shana. I almost forgot about the cousin. I wonder if he can help them with what they need. He needs to keep Sana updated on what is going on. Great dialogue in this one. I do hope Anderson is able to retrieve Shana's family painting, but I fear it is not going to be an easy job. I look forward to the next post. I didn't find anything that needs fixing or changing, of course, you know me, I am the worst editor on this sight.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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Thank you for the wonderful review. Yeah, I thought I better return to the cousin. I have now named him.
Comment from Sis Cat
The two inextricably move closer together. I enjoy your slow pacing of their inevitable romance and how they try to fight against it. The stolen painting fades in the background as the prime driver of the narrative, although it brought the two together. I enjoy your dialogue revealing character and motives and the dogs who want to be part of everything. Mine, too. Double check on your use of the word "mist." I think you mean "midst" in this context. Thank you for sharing another thrilling chapter.
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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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The two inextricably move closer together. I enjoy your slow pacing of their inevitable romance and how they try to fight against it. The stolen painting fades in the background as the prime driver of the narrative, although it brought the two together. I enjoy your dialogue revealing character and motives and the dogs who want to be part of everything. Mine, too. Double check on your use of the word "mist." I think you mean "midst" in this context. Thank you for sharing another thrilling chapter.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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I sure do mean midst. I will make that correction. Thank you for the catch and the kind review.