Perennials of War
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Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
You made me really hungry for a brownie sundae, my friend. Good dialogue and what a horrid ex-wife--she doesn't like dogs. That's a sin in my book. Great writing, my friend~Debbie
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2017
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You made me really hungry for a brownie sundae, my friend. Good dialogue and what a horrid ex-wife--she doesn't like dogs. That's a sin in my book. Great writing, my friend~Debbie
Comment Written 22-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2017
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Thank you for the kind review. LOL I agree anybody who doesn't like dogs is BAD!!!
Comment from Sasha
I didn't see any errors in this post, but you know me, I am the worst editor on this site. I certainly do not like Anderson's ex-wife. She comes across as arrogant and I don't do well with arrogant people. I do hope he finds out who the man was at the museum and what he was looking at. It is not a good sign that Shana partially recognized him. The plot is getting more interesting and keeps me wanting to know more. Very nice work with this one. I enjoyed it very much.
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2017
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I didn't see any errors in this post, but you know me, I am the worst editor on this site. I certainly do not like Anderson's ex-wife. She comes across as arrogant and I don't do well with arrogant people. I do hope he finds out who the man was at the museum and what he was looking at. It is not a good sign that Shana partially recognized him. The plot is getting more interesting and keeps me wanting to know more. Very nice work with this one. I enjoyed it very much.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2017
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from royowen
Patricia sounds like the female version of a pig, sow is it? I enjoyed this connecting episode, building the character count as well as the plot thickening OK, I'm liking the way your chargers are adding to the nature and the complimenting of each other, well done, Barbara, excellent episode, blessings, Roy
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Patricia sounds like the female version of a pig, sow is it? I enjoyed this connecting episode, building the character count as well as the plot thickening OK, I'm liking the way your chargers are adding to the nature and the complimenting of each other, well done, Barbara, excellent episode, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 22-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2017
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Thank you for the kind review.
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Most welcome Barb
Comment from Sankey
Great chapter, once again. Always good reading. You and Bob Hartson and a couple of others are the only reason I am still here in FS. Now some spags."Next time, I'll be sure to ask him (to)pose," interrupted Anderson.
"If you prefer, I ca(n)[me] pick up Emily myself.
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2017
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Great chapter, once again. Always good reading. You and Bob Hartson and a couple of others are the only reason I am still here in FS. Now some spags."Next time, I'll be sure to ask him (to)pose," interrupted Anderson.
"If you prefer, I ca(n)[me] pick up Emily myself.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2017
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Thank you for the catches. I made a lot of last minute changes and I always mess up.
Comment from Ben Colder
Sorry I have missed your work. Coming in now on the chapter and find a drawing interest. I was thinking about an incident where a friend of mine miss a sale at a flee market. Picasso. She refused to pay 7 dollars and another person bought it and sold it for $200, 000. The news was in our state paper three years ago. I can feel the wonder about the painting.
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Sorry I have missed your work. Coming in now on the chapter and find a drawing interest. I was thinking about an incident where a friend of mine miss a sale at a flee market. Picasso. She refused to pay 7 dollars and another person bought it and sold it for $200, 000. The news was in our state paper three years ago. I can feel the wonder about the painting.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2017
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Thank you for the kind review and story. I appreciate it.
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Hello my friend this is well written again and a very entertaining read the x wife seems like a pain as she would be trying to get her hands on Anderson's money I enjoyed well done regards Jill
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reply by the author on 22-Jan-2017
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Hello my friend this is well written again and a very entertaining read the x wife seems like a pain as she would be trying to get her hands on Anderson's money I enjoyed well done regards Jill
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Comment Written 22-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2017
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Thank you for the encouraging review.
Comment from Ulla
Hi Barbara, wonderful chapter and it looks like Anderson has a pretty nasty ex-wife. She sounds like a real bitch. Hope she won't cause too much trouble.
"I was trying to figure out what has in his hand" = "...what he has in his hand."
Looking forward to reading on. All the best. Ulla:)))
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reply by the author on 22-Jan-2017
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Hi Barbara, wonderful chapter and it looks like Anderson has a pretty nasty ex-wife. She sounds like a real bitch. Hope she won't cause too much trouble.
"I was trying to figure out what has in his hand" = "...what he has in his hand."
Looking forward to reading on. All the best. Ulla:)))
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Comment Written 22-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2017
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Thank you for the catch. I appreciate the help and the kind review.
Comment from c_lucas
If Drew knew the right people, his wife should have a tragic accident. Case closed. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2017
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If Drew knew the right people, his wife should have a tragic accident. Case closed. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2017
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Drew isn't that type of person. Thank you for the kind review.
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Just a suggestion.
Comment from judiverse
Oh, oh, it looks like Anderson has an ex-wife in the background. She sounds like a troublemaker, too. No wonder Anderson didn't want Shana to meet her. If she dislikes dogs, she's got to be a bad person. If those stalkers visited her, they are really desperate. Nothing escapes them. Great work with your characterization, and you did an excellent job with the ex-wife. A lot of excitement going, and still a lot of unanswered questions. Deserving six stars. judi
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2017
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Oh, oh, it looks like Anderson has an ex-wife in the background. She sounds like a troublemaker, too. No wonder Anderson didn't want Shana to meet her. If she dislikes dogs, she's got to be a bad person. If those stalkers visited her, they are really desperate. Nothing escapes them. Great work with your characterization, and you did an excellent job with the ex-wife. A lot of excitement going, and still a lot of unanswered questions. Deserving six stars. judi
Comment Written 22-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2017
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Thank you for the wonderful support.
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You're welcome. This makes a great story. I love the setting. judi