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Phone Calls from Caroline

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A cousin calls her younger cousin to rant.

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Comment from lyenochka
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I always love your Cousin Caroline stories! And recently reading about the birth of the baby before you were born and now I see it is your cousin that you love to share about the humorous conversations!

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 09-Feb-2024
    Thank you Helen. I knew you be able to see who I'm refering to when I write Caroline stories.
    Beth
Comment from Wayne Fowler
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Very interesting.
I never heard of a 'caul' so I looked it up - the birth sac.
My son always calls (when he calls) right when I sit down to watch the news. Not wanting to discourage him calling, I say nothing.
Best wishes.

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024
    Thank you again Wayne. I would never stop my cousin from taking while I eating either. Her meal time is a little earlier that mine and she always get bored about the time I'm ready to eat.
reply by Wayne Fowler on 08-Feb-2024
    hah!
    Suggest she nap after her lunch and 'then' to call. (smiley face here)
Comment from Jeano
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Well, that was a fun conversation. I've heard about the veil but was never sure what it was exactly. Psychic, hmmm. I'm going to have to look into this, sounds very interesting. Very nice chapter. It's great to have cousins to share things with. How many books are you working on? I look forward to your postings.

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024
    Thank you Jeano. According to my daugher I've got too many of the going. Actually there is only two main ones right now and they are both biographies. I appreciate the review.
Comment from Teri7
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Beth, this is a very interesting chapter you have penned. You used great and some comical dialogue between you and your cousin. I have a cousin that is that way too. Very good descriptive words too. I look forward to the next chapter. love and blessings, Teri

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reply by the author on 09-Feb-2024
    Thank you Teri. I'm glad you liked this. The humor was providee by my cousin. She always make me laugh.
    Beth
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
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My aunt was 104 and she was telling us about when her husband died, and she was a young mother with their two girls. She was explaining to me and my husband with hand gestures that she never wanted to marry only wait for her husband when she would join him in Heaven. She said, "You don't think anybody wanted all this? Well, I wasn't interested in anyone else, only my husband."

I loved my aunt so much, but I had to turn and laugh. I'm not one to keep a straight face. It was adorable really but unexpected that's why it made me laugh so hard. 104 years old! ;) ha

Thank you for sharing your story and excellent writing!

Alex :)

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 09-Feb-2024
    I think getting older opens the way to just expressing you self without filters. It often does seem to matter any more what others may the thing and say things might not have said when you were younger. It sound like you aunt was in good shape at 104.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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Oh this is wonderful, Beth! I could listen to this conversation all day. Far more sensible that anything else I hear these days:)) I love Caroline and would like to have her in my life, if you could spare her sometime! There are a few edits: "You're supposed (t) let things go after a while;" "nostr(i)ls;" She (is) in assisted living; read about it on Goo(g)le. Excellent laugh! Thank you Debbie

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 Comment Written 08-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 09-Feb-2024
    Thank you Debbie, She is always good of brightening my day with a little humor. Thanks for pointing out the spags.
    Beth
Comment from Mrs. KT
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Hello, Beth!
Now I have read and enjoyed a number of your posts, but this dialogue offering/chapter is by far my favorite!
What a hoot!
The dialogue between you and Caroline is absolutely priceless. I especially enjoyed why Caroline didn't finish Chapter 17 of your book!
Good Lord!

If I may, two small edits are needed:

***The other night, she got her claw inside one of my nostrals (nostrils) and made my nose bleed.

*** I found our (out) something about that caul or veil you were born with. There was a lot of information about that on the internet.

Truly, a most delightful read!
Thank you for sharing!
diane

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 Comment Written 08-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024
    I'm so glad you enjoyed the humor in this Diane. I almost always get a few laughs when we talk. Thanks for pointing out the errors.
    Beth