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Comment from Zue65
I don't normally review scripts, but Zachary is such an interesting character that I continued to read your story. Zachary is an odd character and I look forward to reading the next post. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2022
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I don't normally review scripts, but Zachary is such an interesting character that I continued to read your story. Zachary is an odd character and I look forward to reading the next post. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2022
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Ohhhh, Nassus, just to know that you enjoyed this and will be visiting the next post means so very much to me. -- Jay
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Your give and take of dialogue is amusing, and I didn't find any errors. Sadly, I just can't get into this one like I did your other plays. I hope you are finding some lyricists to assist you in your quest to make a musical.
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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2022
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Your give and take of dialogue is amusing, and I didn't find any errors. Sadly, I just can't get into this one like I did your other plays. I hope you are finding some lyricists to assist you in your quest to make a musical.
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Comment Written 21-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2022
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That's okay that this play doesn't meet your expectations, Carol. I appreciate your candor. I've found the response to Zachary as being varied. He tends to galvanize the reader into either loving him or hating him, but few are lukewarm. I do have some lyricists coming through with some fine lyrics. Again, thanks, Carol!
Jay
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It's wonderful you are getting some great lyrics. Actually, I kind of like Zachery. Everyone else seems kind of pompous, but then I think you mean them to be that way. Zachery is the proverbial round peg in a square hole.
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It's wonderful you are getting some great lyrics. Actually, I kind of like Zachery. Everyone else seems kind of pompous, but then I think you mean them to be that way. Zachery is the proverbial round peg in a square hole.
Comment from Jasmine Girl
The current Duke Charles of Edinburgh title will be given to Print Edward, Queen's youngest son. I don't think it's Zachary. He is a lawn mowing person but he needs his lawn mower back.
You must have been busy and haven't been reviewing.
Well done.
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The current Duke Charles of Edinburgh title will be given to Print Edward, Queen's youngest son. I don't think it's Zachary. He is a lawn mowing person but he needs his lawn mower back.
You must have been busy and haven't been reviewing.
Well done.
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Comment Written 21-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2022
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Well, the one that Zachary "baptized" with his own blood would have been the father of the present-day King of England, Charles and husband to the former Queen, Elizabeth. (I certainly hope my research on that was accurate.)
I have been pulling back on my reviewing of late while working intensely with emails to the lyricists for the play. I've been staying on top of your latest creative endeavors, I believe ... meaning the bird parents and the searching son, but haven't been reading a lot of poetry. What are you referring to that I haven't been reviewing?
Again, Lisa, thank you for reading.
Jay