Quiet Lawyer
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Comment from Judy Lawless
Excellently done, Barbara. The imagery is beautiful and the dialogue very natural. At last, they've moved to the next level. I had a feeling Griffen might show up to put a damper on their picnic. I hope it doesn't turn into a disaster.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2022
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Excellently done, Barbara. The imagery is beautiful and the dialogue very natural. At last, they've moved to the next level. I had a feeling Griffen might show up to put a damper on their picnic. I hope it doesn't turn into a disaster.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2022
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Thank you for the kind review.
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You're most welcome, Barbara.
Comment from Wayne Fowler
I've been waiting for a good fight!
She giggled - I can't see this, grown and sophisticated giggling over drinking coffee.(maybe chuckled)
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Best wishes.
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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2022
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I've been waiting for a good fight!
She giggled - I can't see this, grown and sophisticated giggling over drinking coffee.(maybe chuckled)
This post is a little over 100 words. - a little?
Best wishes.
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Comment Written 16-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2022
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I don't see females as chuckling, only males. Maybe it's just me. I didn't think laughing was right either. I will use the thesaurus and see if I can come up with a better word. Thank you for the kind review. Although I'm 38 and sometimes giggle.
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My wife agrees with you. I should have asked her first.
(giggle-giggle)
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LOL
Comment from Sanku
A lovely chapter .the romance is beautifully progressing ,their passion steadily rising. The fist on Cord's cheek would be from Griffin and Cordero is not going to take it lightly...
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2022
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A lovely chapter .the romance is beautifully progressing ,their passion steadily rising. The fist on Cord's cheek would be from Griffin and Cordero is not going to take it lightly...
Comment Written 16-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2022
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Thank you for the encouragement. I can promise we'll see Griffin more than once and it won't be pretty.
Comment from BethShelby
This is going to the next level and it isn't sitting well with Alan, I'm sure it must have been his fist that connected withvCordero's face. He doesn't give up easily. I really enjoyed this chapter. It made we want to be young and in love.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2022
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This is going to the next level and it isn't sitting well with Alan, I'm sure it must have been his fist that connected withvCordero's face. He doesn't give up easily. I really enjoyed this chapter. It made we want to be young and in love.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2022
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Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from eliz100
You have moved the story and the relationship along nicely. The hook at the end is excellent. I cannot help but wonder who punched Cord in Central Park. I do not see any room for improvement.
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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2022
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You have moved the story and the relationship along nicely. The hook at the end is excellent. I cannot help but wonder who punched Cord in Central Park. I do not see any room for improvement.
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Comment Written 16-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2022
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Thank you for the encouragement.