Artisanal Branches
My tree of poetic faith44 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Artisanal Branches, brings the readers to the altar of learning and creating. Books to read and pages to fill with the spiritual essence of life. Nice.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2022
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This poem, Artisanal Branches, brings the readers to the altar of learning and creating. Books to read and pages to fill with the spiritual essence of life. Nice.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2022
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Thanks Bill - much appreciated :-)
Mike
Comment from dragonpoet
This is a well done poem won't searching for understanding and faith.
We all have our own trees of understanding and ways to nurture it to make the roots deeper and the branches wider.
Good luck in the contest.
K
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2022
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This is a well done poem won't searching for understanding and faith.
We all have our own trees of understanding and ways to nurture it to make the roots deeper and the branches wider.
Good luck in the contest.
K
Comment Written 23-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2022
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Thank you - I really appreciate the response :-)
Mike
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You're very welcome, Mike.
Joan
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and presentation, Mike.
-Thanks for sharing the notes.
-A well written poem with effective imagery
and smooth flow of ideas.
-Vivid imagery in verse one creates a good word pictuere.
-Very good closing verses that express your "core belief" very well.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2022
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-Nice artwork and presentation, Mike.
-Thanks for sharing the notes.
-A well written poem with effective imagery
and smooth flow of ideas.
-Vivid imagery in verse one creates a good word pictuere.
-Very good closing verses that express your "core belief" very well.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2022
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Thank you, Pam, for the lovely review :-).
Mike
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You are welcome, Mike.
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Wow. Even where I lack understanding this work of yours is fantastic. I cen feel a brotherhood of sorts reeling off your words like NEWSREEL black and white updates were broadcast back in the days when news was more important than running ads in theaters.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2022
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Wow. Even where I lack understanding this work of yours is fantastic. I cen feel a brotherhood of sorts reeling off your words like NEWSREEL black and white updates were broadcast back in the days when news was more important than running ads in theaters.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2022
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Thanks so much, Tom. My Hooe was to tap into something universal, regardless of recognised belief systems - something we all, as writers, feel.
Mike
Comment from Sanku
A massive tome and a tree upon it ,tall and reaching towards sky--I see this as a representation of yourself. The book of your experience and learning on which stands your personality .The words you write and the emotions you feel all are within the book and it forms the foundation oe essence of what is you...
Am I crazily off the mark?
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2022
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A massive tome and a tree upon it ,tall and reaching towards sky--I see this as a representation of yourself. The book of your experience and learning on which stands your personality .The words you write and the emotions you feel all are within the book and it forms the foundation oe essence of what is you...
Am I crazily off the mark?
Comment Written 23-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2022
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Thank you :-). I was thrilled with the image - I couldn't have asked for a better accompaniment to my poem. I think you get it - we are both products and producers of wisdom, and art is the medium in which we communicate.
Mike
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Such a description write and your opening stanza is magical, line 5 is out of metre as the stress on ONly interrupts the beat. You certainly have been creative here and inspiring for all us poets, an imaginative write Mike, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2022
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Such a description write and your opening stanza is magical, line 5 is out of metre as the stress on ONly interrupts the beat. You certainly have been creative here and inspiring for all us poets, an imaginative write Mike, love Dolly x
Comment Written 23-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2022
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Thank you, Dolly :-). That's what I get for rearranging the words in a line afterwards! I thought, what is there that I actually personally believe in? The answer, in the end, was obvious :-)
Mike
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I thought this was such a brilliant way to focus your faith upon. There is so much around us, we can't fail to look and wonder. The tree, that was a lovely way to do it. The great Oak tree is my absolute favourite, it is a God given creation, and one that leaves me in awe. Your descriptions are inspiring, and you leave us with much to think about. I think your poem of faith will be hard to beat. Your author's notes round it up nicely. Well done and good luck in the contest! :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2022
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I thought this was such a brilliant way to focus your faith upon. There is so much around us, we can't fail to look and wonder. The tree, that was a lovely way to do it. The great Oak tree is my absolute favourite, it is a God given creation, and one that leaves me in awe. Your descriptions are inspiring, and you leave us with much to think about. I think your poem of faith will be hard to beat. Your author's notes round it up nicely. Well done and good luck in the contest! :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 23-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2022
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Thanks so much, Sandra :-). I was driven by something when writing this - a deep feeling about what I actually believe. I'm so happy it came across well.
Mike
Comment from Monica Chaddick
This was a beautiful poem. It was well written and it flowed very well. The artwork went well with your poem. There is so much beauty in the world, if people would only look around themselves. You have captured that perfectly. Best of luck in this and all endeavors.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2022
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This was a beautiful poem. It was well written and it flowed very well. The artwork went well with your poem. There is so much beauty in the world, if people would only look around themselves. You have captured that perfectly. Best of luck in this and all endeavors.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2022
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Tha ks so much - what a lovely review :-)
Mike
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
WOW! Everytime I think I know you a little, you throw a curve ball and knock down the wall of understanding I am building. You are a complex man, Mike full of surprises. Wonderful entry for the contest. Kate xx
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2022
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WOW! Everytime I think I know you a little, you throw a curve ball and knock down the wall of understanding I am building. You are a complex man, Mike full of surprises. Wonderful entry for the contest. Kate xx
Comment Written 23-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2022
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Thanks so much, Kate - what a great compliment. I love to throw curve balls :-). There isn't much that qualifies as something I actually believe in, but art and its power definitely qualifies.
Mike
Comment from lyenochka
This is a stunning poem and to describe the joy of creating. I was surprised by the title's use of "artisinal" which I don't know. I only know "artisanal" which is normally used to describe foods crafted by hand. But your poem describes the crafting with words by hand with "tools of understanding" and "clacking of keys."
I think you are seeing the beauty of creation because that is the gift of the Creator. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2022
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This is a stunning poem and to describe the joy of creating. I was surprised by the title's use of "artisinal" which I don't know. I only know "artisanal" which is normally used to describe foods crafted by hand. But your poem describes the crafting with words by hand with "tools of understanding" and "clacking of keys."
I think you are seeing the beauty of creation because that is the gift of the Creator. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 23-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2022
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Thank you :-). Typical of me to make very sure the poem is proofed but forget to check the title!
Mike
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Did you get my questions? Let me know if you want to do it as a script. Maybe we could have your characters show up...
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I did. Apologies for being slow - I had some 'time off' as it was my birthday at the weekend, but back reviewing now so I'll get on it. Excited :-)
Mike
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No pressure! Happy Birthday!!
Let me know what format you prefer and hope we can collaborate on showcasing your creativity and humor.