Quiet Lawyer
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Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I'm having a lot of trouble with Advanced Editor. It wouldn't let me copy and paste into it! What's going on?
I liked the way Ali thought to buy a phone that couldn't be traced. I think I'll have to get one!!! Lol. I enjoyed this chapter, there was some relevant questions and answers in this part, that now only satisfied Ali and Cord, but the reader as well. Excellent chapter, my friend. Well done. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2022
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I'm having a lot of trouble with Advanced Editor. It wouldn't let me copy and paste into it! What's going on?
I liked the way Ali thought to buy a phone that couldn't be traced. I think I'll have to get one!!! Lol. I enjoyed this chapter, there was some relevant questions and answers in this part, that now only satisfied Ali and Cord, but the reader as well. Excellent chapter, my friend. Well done. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 24-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2022
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You're the second reviewer who said they were having problems with advanced editor. I may use it for a while. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from BethShelby
This story is always interesting and of course I'm rooting for Ali and Cord to find a way to work things out when she much return to the city. About the advanced editor, ever since they added more fonts I having trouble with transferring things to it. Looking forward to the nest post, as always.
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2022
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This story is always interesting and of course I'm rooting for Ali and Cord to find a way to work things out when she much return to the city. About the advanced editor, ever since they added more fonts I having trouble with transferring things to it. Looking forward to the nest post, as always.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2022
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Thank you for the kind review and the hint with advanced editor. I may have to stop using it.
Comment from Ulla
Hi Barbara, so the story continues and I really like the way it does. Ali is growing on me, and I liked she had the wit about her to buy a burner phone. Now, what's next? Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2022
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Hi Barbara, so the story continues and I really like the way it does. Ali is growing on me, and I liked she had the wit about her to buy a burner phone. Now, what's next? Ulla:)))
Comment Written 24-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2022
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We shall see what's next. LOL Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from nomi338
I really like and appreciate the way that you are dealing with, or should I say the way your characters are dealing with issues of race and class. These are always and I think maybe always have been, difficult issues to handle in a realistic way. They are important issues and play a large part in coloring how relationships either advance or fall completely apart.
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2022
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I really like and appreciate the way that you are dealing with, or should I say the way your characters are dealing with issues of race and class. These are always and I think maybe always have been, difficult issues to handle in a realistic way. They are important issues and play a large part in coloring how relationships either advance or fall completely apart.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2022
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Thank you for the kind review. I appreciate the encouragement.
Comment from John Ciarmello
An excellent chapter! I loved the fact that Ali bought a burn phone. It seems there is more to her than meets the eye. I love the way their romance is developing. Best, JohnC
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reply by the author on 24-Jul-2022
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An excellent chapter! I loved the fact that Ali bought a burn phone. It seems there is more to her than meets the eye. I love the way their romance is developing. Best, JohnC
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Comment Written 24-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2022
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Fleedleflump
I enjoyed riding along with the two of them as they developed their mutual understanding a little more. I love the phone call where we only hear Alex's part and get to fill in the blanks - that was a fun device.
Mike
Spag note:
'Under her breath said, "Duh!"' - think this needs a 'she' before 'said' - 'Under her breath, she said, "Duh!"
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reply by the author on 24-Jul-2022
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I enjoyed riding along with the two of them as they developed their mutual understanding a little more. I love the phone call where we only hear Alex's part and get to fill in the blanks - that was a fun device.
Mike
Spag note:
'Under her breath said, "Duh!"' - think this needs a 'she' before 'said' - 'Under her breath, she said, "Duh!"
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Comment Written 24-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2022
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It sure does and when I edited it, numerous times, I read it with the 'she' there. GRRR, I hate when I do that. Thank you for the catch and the kind review.