The Incomparable Fanny Barnwarmer
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32 total reviews
Comment from Ulla
Wow, Jay, I am intrigued. I've been missing this story but you certainly don't disappoint. They have very little time left and we still need to hear the most crucial details. I can't wait for those. What a fantastic story, painting a picture of a time gone by. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2022
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Wow, Jay, I am intrigued. I've been missing this story but you certainly don't disappoint. They have very little time left and we still need to hear the most crucial details. I can't wait for those. What a fantastic story, painting a picture of a time gone by. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 10-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2022
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Please accept my grateful appreciation for your kind words. Yours is one of ten reviews I answered (I hoped) thoughtfully ... only to have them erased after the tenth one. Consequently, this must sound generic, my friend.
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The same thing has happened to me in the past. It's very frustrating. Thanks a lot for your answer. :)))
Comment from judiverse
I'm glad you brought in Herbie as a bit of a break from the two characters, but you might give credit in your list of characters. The revenge motive is very intriguing. And with Juniper being the one groomed to do the killing. Interesting response to the judge's verdict with both the judge and Flourney having to skedaddle to other parts of the country. Love the imagery in the cartoon of them. The reporter doesn't have much time left before he's scheduled to leave, so we'll see if he's able to find up his interview in that amount of time Fanny does tend to ramble on. judi
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2022
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I'm glad you brought in Herbie as a bit of a break from the two characters, but you might give credit in your list of characters. The revenge motive is very intriguing. And with Juniper being the one groomed to do the killing. Interesting response to the judge's verdict with both the judge and Flourney having to skedaddle to other parts of the country. Love the imagery in the cartoon of them. The reporter doesn't have much time left before he's scheduled to leave, so we'll see if he's able to find up his interview in that amount of time Fanny does tend to ramble on. judi
Comment Written 10-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2022
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Please accept my grateful appreciation for your kind words. Yours is one of ten reviews I answered (I hoped) thoughtfully ... only to have them erased after the tenth one. Consequently, this must sound generic, my friend.
Comment from BethShelby
I enjoyed reading this. I've been missing this story. The reported doesn't have much time left to squeeze the rest of the story out before he has to go. There are still things left that we'd not heard before. You certainly no the language of the day and aren't afraid to use the "n" word.
No one questioned it back in those days. I guess it wasn't even considered offensive.
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2022
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I enjoyed reading this. I've been missing this story. The reported doesn't have much time left to squeeze the rest of the story out before he has to go. There are still things left that we'd not heard before. You certainly no the language of the day and aren't afraid to use the "n" word.
No one questioned it back in those days. I guess it wasn't even considered offensive.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2022
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Please accept my grateful appreciation for your kind words. Yours is one of ten reviews I answered (I hoped) thoughtfully ... only to have them erased after the tenth one. Consequently, this must sound generic, my friend.
Comment from dmt1967
This is a very good read and I like the way I can picture the characters by their accents. This is a very well written script and thank you for sharing. Have a great weekend.
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2022
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This is a very good read and I like the way I can picture the characters by their accents. This is a very well written script and thank you for sharing. Have a great weekend.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2022
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Please accept my grateful appreciation for your kind words. Yours is one of ten reviews I answered (I hoped) thoughtfully ... only to have them erased after the tenth one. Consequently, this must sound generic, my friend.
Comment from John Ciarmello
I'm so happy Fanny is back and, of course, you, Jay. :) A great scene. The notion that Juni was being groomed by her mother to kill Thurston Flourney is a perfect hanger.
I'm looking forward to another.
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2022
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I'm so happy Fanny is back and, of course, you, Jay. :) A great scene. The notion that Juni was being groomed by her mother to kill Thurston Flourney is a perfect hanger.
I'm looking forward to another.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2022
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Please accept my grateful appreciation for your kind words. Yours is one of ten reviews I answered (I hoped) thoughtfully ... only to have them erased after the tenth one. Consequently, this must sound generic, my friend.
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No worries, Jay. I'm used to being erased! I'll just go back to the old drawing board. :))
Comment from Terry Broxson
Jay, it that happened indeed! Well, we have to wait for the next installment. Write faster! I guess our intrepid reporter could miss his train, but I am guessing not. Good
job, waiting for the next scene. Terry.
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2022
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Jay, it that happened indeed! Well, we have to wait for the next installment. Write faster! I guess our intrepid reporter could miss his train, but I am guessing not. Good
job, waiting for the next scene. Terry.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2022
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Please accept my grateful appreciation for your kind words. Yours is one of ten reviews I answered (I hoped) thoughtfully ... only to have them erased after the tenth one. Consequently, this must sound generic, my friend.
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Are you better?
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Much better, thank you. I've been taking Paxlovid for the past four days. One more day and the series will be finished. I'll retest and hopefully, it will be negative. I've just had to put FS on the back burner.
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Good news and understandable!
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
Oh, no. My head is spinning with confusion as to what drove these different women. I feel as though I need to go back and read the whole play carefully in one go. And an important clue for me was Fanny's confusion about Herbie's wedding. What else is she confused about? Kate xx
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2022
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Oh, no. My head is spinning with confusion as to what drove these different women. I feel as though I need to go back and read the whole play carefully in one go. And an important clue for me was Fanny's confusion about Herbie's wedding. What else is she confused about? Kate xx
Comment Written 10-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2022
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Please accept my grateful appreciation for your kind words. Yours is one of ten reviews I answered (I hoped) thoughtfully ... only to have them erased after the tenth one. Consequently, this must sound generic, my friend.
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I am used to this horrible occurence. Please don't worry about it. Kate xx
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I am used to this horrible occurrence. It's always happening to me. Please don't worry about it. Kate xx
Comment from country ranch writer
7/10/2022--------3:50am.
Miss Fanny I am sure has many a take to tell about the goings on in her town and what is said done or didn't do.Quite a character she is the reporter shakes his head as he listens and takes notes.
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2022
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7/10/2022--------3:50am.
Miss Fanny I am sure has many a take to tell about the goings on in her town and what is said done or didn't do.Quite a character she is the reporter shakes his head as he listens and takes notes.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2022
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Please accept my grateful appreciation for your kind words. Yours is one of ten reviews I answered (I hoped) thoughtfully ... only to have them erased after the tenth one. Consequently, this must sound generic, my friend.
Comment from country ranch writer
7/10/2022--------3:50am.
Miss Fanny I am sure has many a take to tell about the goings on in her town and what is said done or didn't do.Quite a character she is the reporter shakes his head as he listens and takes notes.
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2022
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7/10/2022--------3:50am.
Miss Fanny I am sure has many a take to tell about the goings on in her town and what is said done or didn't do.Quite a character she is the reporter shakes his head as he listens and takes notes.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2022
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Please accept my grateful appreciation for your kind words. Yours is one of ten reviews I answered (I hoped) thoughtfully ... only to have them erased after the tenth one. Consequently, this must sound generic, my friend.
Comment from Sankey
Wow, old mate. I love all the vernacular and all that. This was really good reading and I look forward to where you are going with it. No spags. Nearly three lines and Tom wanted more! Sigh!
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2022
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Wow, old mate. I love all the vernacular and all that. This was really good reading and I look forward to where you are going with it. No spags. Nearly three lines and Tom wanted more! Sigh!
Comment Written 10-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2022
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Haha! Tell me about it, Geoff! It's frustrating when you've said everything you wanted to, then Tom comes in and says, "Charm them some more ..." Thanks for the six stars, bud!